Talk:Elizabeth Rowe (flutist)

COI
This article has been reviewed for COI prior to being promoted to mainspace, & found good. --Tagishsimon (talk) 23:29, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

Requested updates
My name is Elizabeth Rowe and I am the subject of the article. I would like to request a few changes related to my departure from the Boston Symphony Group to focus on my leadership coaching business, as reported here. Pinging, who approved the article originally from Articles for Creation. Below are my proposed changes.

1. Lead

2. Bottom of Career Section


 * Explanation: The "Retirement" section title makes it sound like I am retiring from work altogether, rather than just resigning from one job to focus on another.


 * Explanation: A couple issues. While the cited article was published in April 2024, it does not say this is when I announced I would start a career in leadership coaching. To the contrary, the cited article infers I've had a leadership coaching business for years ("Her track toward leadership coaching began with her own flute students at Tanglewood and at New England Conservatory, where she maintained a small studio until a few years ago.")

3. External Links

Roweflute (talk) 18:08, 21 May 2024 (UTC)


 * ✅, although maybe the first paragraph should mention that you've moved from playing in the orchestra to coaching? I'm unsure of how to word that now so I've just edited it as asked, but perhaps another editor can make it a bit clearer in the future. Jabster28 (talk) 14:54, 29 June 2024 (UTC)