Talk:Ellen Spiro

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I wrote the info for this page. I'm a fan of Spiro's work so I guess I got carried away. I'll go through and clean it up... are there any parts that you think are particularly "un-neutral"? Is it OK to leave the awards section? I see other filmmakers have those, but I new to all of this, your feedback is appreciated. BLBaker 22:05, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Second sentence should be relevant, not what it is now. "one person crew" is for a later section.  What she is "known for" is an unsourced statement and should be removed.  This paragraph should contain a simple summary of her body of work.  Second paragraph should not say "award winning". Awards should not be listed, but worked into paragraphs where relevant.  Intro section should be generally shorter.  Block quote borders on plagiarism, and is too long to read.  It should include only the relevant few quotes.  "Like the subjects she chooses" remark is ungrammatical, and not NPOV.  how she is "considered" is, again, an unsourced statement.  I suggest these changes Youdontsmellbad (talk) 10:39, 22 February 2008 (UTC)


 * To whoever wrote this press release, it's been months and you haven't fixed it. I'm going to delete most of the article now to keep in NPOV.  Youdontsmellbad (talk) 00:22, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

Press Release?
This article reads like a press release for Spiro. It needs to be edited for neutral point-of-view. --Jeremy Butler 10:49, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

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