Talk:Ely Shipley

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jay Linsley. Peer reviewers: Sam Mae.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:39, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think you're on the right track here, even though you haven't written much yet. You have clear headings that help the reader to easily read and understand the information, your references are clearly displayed, and you include hyperlinks that lead the reader to other pages to learn more. You didn't plagiarize, which is great. The one thing I would say is that your second sentence reads a bit awkwardly. I can see that you are trying to reword some things but play around with that sentence a bit so it reads more smoothly. I also see that you added a Notes section, which I think is great. I look forward to reading this article when it is completed!

Audreyspell (talk) 18:31, 10 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
It's nice to see that you have a format for your page already! There obviously needs to be more info, but I understand it takes time to add, edit, and format this into Wiki. I like what you have so far about the awards, as well as the citations and notes for it. However, I would see if there's any personal info you can find about the author and start putting it into your article, just so you can have a good intro to the poet. Sam Mae (talk) 01:20, 11 October 2018 (UTC)