Talk:Email Surveillance/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 13:53, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Image: The current image is probably going to deleted, it in unneeded for the article. Add File:TheOffice(US)2-09.jpg instead for infobox
 * See below.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:02, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox: Add "running time" to box
 * Infobox: List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes → List of The Office (U.S.) episodes
 * Lede: Link second season
 * Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
 * Lede: Link Nielsen rating to Nielsen ratings
 * Lede: 8.3 million viewers → 8.3 million viewers in its original broadcast
 * Plot: However to However,. with comma
 * Cultural references: Italic Big Brother
 * See below.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:02, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reception: "My Name is Earl" → My Name Is Earl
 * External links: Link NBC.com to NBC
 * External links: Add The Office Wiki Link

On hold. TBrandley 13:53, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I changed all except the image and the Big Brother reference. For the latter, it's the name of an (for lack of a better term) "entity" and not the show. For the first one, I've left the image as is, but posted a rationale on the deletion page. The image you suggested, however, is not critically discussed in the article and is not a good replacement.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:50, 19 June 2012 (UTC)