Talk:Emem Isong

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Peer Review
Overall, this is a very well written article. Each section of the article gives the reader detailed information on different aspects of Isong’s life. In particular, the “Legacy” section gives a great perspective on the impact her career has had on the Nigerian film industry. You make good use of a variety of sources and cite frequently. I made a few grammatical changes to the article (e.g. commas, sentence structure changes), but overall, there were very few mistakes. There are a couple of changes that could be made. First, it might be advantageous to create a table for her filmography to make it more reader-friendly. Also, you should add a citation at the end of the “Early Life and Education” section to show where you got the last the last two sentences from. Finally, you may want to add something in the introductory paragraph about her first feature film, Champagne, since you already mention her second film.UnoriginalUsername (talk) 23:45, 9 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
This article contains an impressive amount of information and is structured clearly and cohesively. Each section contains a significant amount of information, particularly impressive are the "Early Life" and "Legacy" sections since it can be fairly difficult to find biographical information for women directors. The article makes great use of citations and is properly referenced throughout, with what appear to be numerous credible sources. Overall the article is very well written, the only changes I would make would be to add the films' year of release to those mentioned in the "Career" section, as well as create a table for her filmography and possibly awards. Tillercat (talk) 02:45, 10 November 2016 (UTC)