Talk:Emilio Charles Jr./GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:07, 27 April 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 08:07, 27 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Infobox

 * Delink both mentions of the word Mexico

Lead

 * Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "who is best known under his" - the
 * "Asistencia Asesoría y Administración (AAA) and International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG)." - the acroynms of AAA and IWRG are unneeded since they are not mentioned anywhere else in the article
 * "Charles worked for virtually all major" - all of the major

Personal life

 * "His father was a professional wrestler, known under the ring name Emilio Charles, active in the 1940s and 1950s." - His father was a professional wrestler in the 1940s and 1950, and was known under the ring name Emilio Charles.

Professional wrestling career

 * "Emilio Charles Jr. is the son of professional wrestler Emilio Charles, but was not trained by his father;" - you've already mentioned the text in bold in the previous sub-section

Los Destructores (1987–1990)

 * "Los Destructores held the titles for almost two years and had a series of title defenses" - repetition of the word "titles"
 * "from Atlantis on July 17, 1988, only to lose it back to Atlantis eleven days later." - repetition of "Atlantis"
 * "when he defeated his rival for the title once more." - whom exactly?
 * "Not long after the title loss, Charles left Los Destructores, who decided to replace him with Rocco Valente instead." - needs a reliable source to verify that the information is correct
 * "over the next couple of years," - please state how many years exactly
 * "He held the championship for close to ten months" - almost ten months

Los Chacales (1995–1996)

 * "Los Chacales' reign as CMLL World Trios Champions lasted almost a year, 357 days," - lasted 357 days,
 * Also, the Emilio Charles >>> Matches source from CageMatch should be used to verify the portion of text above since SuperLuchas does not explicitly state it
 * "While most were real" - While most participants
 * "in the final of an 8-Team tournament" - eight-team

Los Guapos (1999–2002)

 * The paragraph would be better off divided into two
 * "and looked down on anyone who was not as handsome as he was." - more formal; treated those who were not as handsome as him with scorn.
 * Wikilink vignettes to Glossary_of_professional_wrestling_terms
 * "Scorpiro, Jr. and Bestia Negra" - Scorpio Jr.
 * "and neither were actually considered good looking" - attractive
 * "2000 Shocker was invited to work for New Japan Pro Wrestling (NJPW)" - I think a word and punctuation is missing at the start of this piece of text
 * "2000 Shocker was invited to work for New Japan Pro Wrestling (NJPW) on several occasions and due to his NJPW tours of Japan Scorpio Jr. and Bestia Negra often found themselves without a partner for Trios matches," - this sentence should end with a period in place of the comma
 * "their solution was to bring in Emilio Charles Jr. to become the fourth Guapo team member," - Start this sentence with a capital letter and end it with a capital letter instead of a comma
 * "but at first went along with it." - please reword this phrase to its literal meaning

Los Talibanes (2002–2004)

 * Delink terrorists per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "The feud with Shocker and his group continued over the following years," - how many years exactly?

Final years (2005–2011)

 * "he wrestled newcomer Máscara Purpura in a series of matches, culminating with a Lucha de Apuesta match on September 16, 2007," - repetition of "match"
 * "Charles worked a limited number of matches for International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG)" - the acronyms are not needed in parentheses since they are not mentioned anywhere else
 * "and a couple of matches in 2011," - how many exactly?