Talk:Emily Sartain/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 23:25, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 23:25, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * Cite the traveling part of the early life section.
 * That block of text all came from the same source, so I just added inline citations at the sentence level.-- CaroleHenson (talk) 04:25, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
 * "Sartain worked as art editor for the paper, Our Continent from" rm comma
 * ✅-- CaroleHenson (talk) 04:25, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
 * "She trained women who taught art to young children or up to the university level." written awkwardly, reword.
 * Yep, good point. It seems to be better to just remove "to young children..." and keep it simple.-- CaroleHenson (talk) 04:25, 3 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 23:57, 2 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks so much, . The changes are ✅.-- CaroleHenson (talk) 04:25, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman  15:12, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Excellent, thanks!-- CaroleHenson (talk) 16:16, 7 February 2015 (UTC)