Talk:Emma Gendron

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Bicyclepedia. Peer reviewers: Alice10flowers, Jordann5225!.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:41, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review Emma Gendron
This article on Emma Gendron is really well done, and has a lot of great information! as well gives great detail on her life experience and the work that she has done. One recommendation that I would like to add is combining some of her work into longer paragraphs so that it is an easier read and more organized, making it less choppy. Adding more in text citations on the information that you have found on Gendron.

In the first paragraph I've also made some changes as I included Gendron's birth date as well where she was born, to start off the entry with more information on this individual. I also noticed some grammar errors as I fixed those.

Suggestions: -Add more citations -double check grammar errors and sentences to assure they make sense and are easy to read

Great work on this article! very good/interesting read. Jordann5225! (talk) 3:28, 30 October 2018 (UTC)

Emma Gendron Peer Review
This article contains a lot of great information and uses its source material well. You do a good job at balancing information about Gendron's personal life with information about her professional life. I have made a few minor edits throughout the page on typos and correcting some sentence flow. I also made an edit on one sentence to help it convey more of a neutral tone. [I did not remove any of your information, only the wording was changed] I only noticed this once throughout the article. Otherwise, you have done a great job at conveying information from a neutral standpoint. Some suggestions that I have are, - add more in-text links to other pages pertaining to names, places, film titles, etc. - double-check the flow of your sentences to avoid choppiness. [there were a few instances where I added some prepositions in-order to create better flow] - double-check spelling and grammar. Overall, excellent job! Alice10flowers (talk) 18:17, 30 October 2018 (UTC)