Talk:Emma Hollis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 02:09, 16 April 2012 (UTC)


 * I'll take this. I am a little questioning of the character's notability, but not enough to tag / AFD it. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:09, 16 April 2012 (UTC)

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 * "Hollis is a young special agent within the Federal Bureau of Investigation. During the show's final year, she was partnered with offender profiler Frank Black (Lance Henriksen). The character of Hollis was portrayed by Canadian actor Klea Scott, who joined Millennium in its final season." -- Perhaps make it clear immediately that the character was introduced in the final season.
 * "written off as the hallucinations of Henriksen's character Frank Black" - We learn that Henriksen played Black in the above section. Trim, perhaps?

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 * Added a CN tag after a direct quote


 * Thanks for looking over this one for me. If you're concerned about notability I could add a few extra secondary sources to help establish that. Several of them don't really add additional material, but I could double up some of the refs to help to establish a wider level of critical recognition if you think that would be useful. I think I've address all of your concerns specifically listed, let me know if there's anything else you feel could be amended. GRAPPLE   X  14:35, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
 * I'd appreciate that. That's the only thing. I made several changes on my own; you may want to check those, as some were a little extensive. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:44, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Found a few additional mentions combing through Highbeam, so I felt they'd be more useful than duplicate info. Let me know if more would still be necessary. GRAPPLE   X  15:53, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good enough for more. Passing Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:50, 16 April 2012 (UTC)