Talk:Emma Nāwahī/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 23:55, 19 August 2018 (UTC)

OK, I'll be picking this one up. Please reply individually under each of my posts and mark with ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. Catrìona (talk) 18:58, 18 August 2018 (UTC)

This looks like another quick pass, AGF'ing on offline sources. I made a few prose edits, and the only suggestion I have at this point is:
 * bail was set at 10,000 dollars — might be worth adding a conversion for 21st century readers.
 * I don't know the conversion rate and do not know if that was Hawaiian dollars or US dollars. KAVEBEAR (talk) 04:05, 22 August 2018 (UTC)