Talk:Emmanuel "Manny" Mijares

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From Emmanuel "Manny" Mijares is a multi-platinum song writer and executive producer. He is best known as a co-writer on the hit single What A Feeling as performed by Kelly Rowland of the pop group Destiny's Child as well as the first US dance single by CNN Artist of the Year Ricky J. He is the founder of the independent record label "Upscale Records", a division of his production company "Upscale Recording & Productions". In 2008, Mijares established Big Talent Showcase, a company which helps new aspiring talents showcase their abilities to those in the entertainment industry.

To Emmanuel "Manny" Mijares is an American record producer, celebrity manager and film producer. He is the president of Upscale Records and co-founder of Hit Music Partners. He is known as the co-writer on Dua Lipa’s French version of IDGAF, What A Feeling as performed by Kelly Rowland of the pop group Destiny's Child as well as the first US dance single by CNN Artist of the Year Ricky J. In 2008, Mijares established Big Talent Showcase, a company which helps new aspiring talents showcase their abilities to those in the entertainment industry.

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TP495 (talk) 16:59, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

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Regards, Spintendo  20:12, 20 May 2019 (UTC)
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From Emmanuel "Manny" Mijares is a multi-platinum song writer and executive producer. He is best known as a co-writer on the hit single What A Feeling as performed by Kelly Rowland of the pop group Destiny's Child as well as the first US dance single by CNN Artist of the Year Ricky J. He is the founder of the independent record label "Upscale Records", a division of his production company "Upscale Recording & Productions". In 2008, Mijares established Big Talent Showcase, a company which helps new aspiring talents showcase their abilities to those in the entertainment industry.

To Emmanuel "Manny" Mijares is an American record producer, celebrity manager and film producer. He is the president of Upscale Records and co-founder of Hit Music Partners. He is known as the co-writer on Dua Lipa’s French version of IDGAF, What A Feeling as performed by Kelly Rowland of the pop group Destiny's Child as well as the first US dance single by CNN Artist of the Year Ricky J. In 2008, Mijares established Big Talent Showcase, a company which helps new aspiring talents showcase their abilities to those in the entertainment industry.

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TP495 (talk) 20:39, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Please add the WIkiLinks for the companies mentioned (Upscale Records and Hit Music Partners). Spintendo  18:43, 25 May 2019 (UTC)