Talk:Emotions (Mariah Carey album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade  -  talk2me  - 07:29, 30 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "Additionally, Emotions features influences of a range of genres such" --> change to "from a"
 * "Upon release, Emotions received generally mixed reviews from music critics ; many of them had mixed feelings regarding the album's material. " Remove where i have striked as its redundant, of course the material is the thing that is mixed, they are not commenting on her face =P
 * Haha Sassy :P


 * Critical reception
 * "He called the album's lead single "bone chilling," however calling some of the album's high notes "vocal range overkill." Not a proper sentence. Please rewrite.
 * "He outed" is used twice, this is not the word you are looking for; i would use "called" "chose" "selected" ect ect, something like that.
 * "however calling most of the album unoriginal and not an improvement over her debut." Tense issue, however he called
 * "DeKnock called some of the album's ballads "boring," however calling Carey's voice "breathtaking." Again, tense, "he called" not calling.


 * References
 * 72, remove italics on Allmusic and wrong publisher.

Overall great work on this article. Please message me once these are addressed. - (CK)Lakeshade  -  talk2me  - 07:29, 30 May 2011 (UTC)


 * All done CK :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   19:09, 30 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Unless im blind, "dance-pop" in the info box is not sourced anywhere or mentioned in the article.
 * "According to Nielsen SoundScan, the album's stateside sales are estimated at over 3,584,000, not including sales from BMG music clubs." is also unsourced.