Talk:Empedocles (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 14:40, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Review
Minor edits i made: — Hahc 21  04:20, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot
 * "Jeb he sees a car chase" >> "Jeb witnesses a car chase"
 * "the murders is related to" >> "the murders are related to"
 * "through the head" >> "in the head"
 * "when they discovered Luke’s body, Reyes and Doggett both saw the body transform into ashes momentarily." >> "both Reyes and Doggett saw it transform into ashes instantly."
 * "convincing himself he did not see it" >> "convincing himself he did not saw it"
 * "Doggett soon attacks Mulder for looking into his son's case, but Reyes soon shows up" Redundancy of "soon". >> "Doggett soon attacks Mulder for looking into his son's case, but then Reyes shows up"
 * Other minor fixes. They're too many to note here.


 * Luke's murder was solved in "Release" Knowing there could be trouble if Luke ever told anyone about Regali's "business", Regali killed Luke. 24.156.65.45 (talk) 22:15, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

Verdict
— Hahc 21  04:38, 20 June 2012 (UTC)