Talk:Empire Earth: The Art of Conquest/GA1

This article has been reviewed as part of WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force in an effort to ensure all listed Good articles continue to meet the Good article criteria. In reviewing the article, I have found there are some issues that may need to be addressed, listed below. I will check back in seven days. If these issues are addressed, the article will remain listed as a Good article. Otherwise, it may be delisted (such a decision may be challenged through WP:GAR). If improved after it has been delisted, it may be nominated at WP:GAN. Feel free to drop a message on my talk page if you have any questions, and many thanks for all the hard work that has gone into this article thus far.


 * Verifiability/original research concerns: all the subsections under the Campaigns section are completely unsourced. It needs to be reliably sourced and OR avoided if found. Also, the first paragraph in the Gameplay section is also unsourced (unless the citation in the following paragraph is that source, in which case a citation should be placed at the end of the first paragraph). The gameplay in Art of Conquest is the same as in the original Empire Earth, albeit with some changes reads like OR; a source is needed to verify this similarity. I have placed fact tags on other content portions that are unsourced.
 * Prose concerns: The "Asian Campaign" subsection-paragraph is too long and should be split into two or three smaller paragraphs to improve readability.

MuZemike 20:50, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

None of the issues above have been addressed for the past week, so I am delisting from GA. It can be renominated for GA when the issues above are addressed. MuZemike 17:00, 7 July 2009 (UTC)