Talk:Enemies & Allies

Thoughts
MacLean25 I sent you two newspaper articles, hopefully they help flesh out this article. Also, I suggest a slight expansion of the lead to include summary of all sections per WP:LEAD. In that process, you should probably break up that second sentence in the lead, its really long and bulky. Also, a WP:Fair Use upload of the first edition cover would be extremely appropriate. I didn't read for grammer and style stuff, I more scanned the everything but the lead briefly. I think balance on sections seems appropriate. See if the two new sources help any, Sadads (talk) 05:13, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I've incorporated the new sources and implemented the suggestions. maclean (talk) 02:30, 1 July 2011 (UTC)