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I am currently doing an assignment on design at university and Cizano's work came up in my research. I notice the page needs a bit of a cleanup as it is clearly not as good as it could be and has suffered from some very suspicious edits. I will leave it a few days before removing the tag so if anyone wants to make any suggestions they can do so. Albrighton Titon (talk) 16:47, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

Kindly edit the page as per below requested changes
>>> Kindly add a bracket around his date of birth and add 'an artist' in the first line of the first paragraph.

From: Count Enrico Marone Cinzano born April 5, 1963, is a furniture designer from Turin, Italy.

To: Count Enrico Marone Cinzano (born April 5, 1963) is an artist and furniture designer from Turin, Italy.

>>> Kindly change the Early life section adding details about his school

From: Cinzano was born to Alberto Paolo Marone Cinzano and Cristina Marone Cinzano (born Countess Camerana). When he was nine years old, he attended boarding school at Aiglon College and graduated from a military academy in the UK. He then studied business at Babson College, Massachusetts. After graduating, he stayed in the United States where he worked in advertising, banking, and real estate before co-founding the environmentally friendly fashion company Project Alabama (now known as Alabama Chanin) with Natalie Chanin in the year 2000. He began designing bespoke furniture in 2007.

To: Marone Cinzano was born to Count Alberto Paolo Rodolfo Marone Cinzano Alcorta and Cristina Marone Cinzano (born Countess Camerana). When he was nine years old, he attended boarding school at Aiglon College and graduated from Mount Kelly School, a military academy in the UK. He then studied business administration at Babson College, Massachusetts.

>>> Kindly add one paragraph at the beginning of Career section (re-adjusting text from Early-life section to Career section)

To: Following his education, Marone Cinzano stayed in the United States where he worked in advertising, banking, and real estate and later became an entrepreneur, developing luxury residential real estate in Connecticut and New York City. In 2000, he co-founded Project Alabama which was an environmentally friendly fashion company that used recycled jersey fabrics for design, and sub-contracted local artisans for production.

>>> Kindly edit the first paragraph of Career section to remove promotional text which sounds like advertising

From: In 2007, Cinzano established his own company: the Enrico Marone Cinzano Collection. The company designs ethical and sustainable home products and homes. He creates his pieces from recycled materials with the intention of sparking conversations around sustainability. His pieces range from coffee tables, lamps, sofas, and cabinets and can sell from anywhere between $9,500 to $75,000. His work has been exhibited at the Pearl Lam in China and the Spazio Rossana Orlandi in Milan.

To: In 2007, Marone Cinzano established the Enrico Marone Cinzano Collection which focuses on designing ethical and sustainable home products and homes. His work has been exhibited at the Pearl Lam Gallery in China, and the Spazio Rossana Orlandi, Museo Bagatti Valsecchi and Museo della Scienza e della Tecnica in Milan, Design Miami and PAD London.

>>> Kindly edit the second paragraph of Career section to remove promotional text

From: Cinzano launched his first collection of sustainable design in 2012. The collection emphasised the use of natural or environmentally-friendly materials such as reclaimed wood, recycled steel, and homemade glue. It comprised an armoire, a bookcase, a couch, an armchair, a table, and a Lazy Susan.

To: Cinzano launched his first collection of sustainable design in 2012. The collection emphasised the use of natural or environmentally-friendly materials.

>>> Kindly edit the third paragraph of Career section

From: Cinzano’s first solo exhibition took place at Hong Kong’s Pearl Lam Design Gallery, in 2015. The exhibition was titled China Clean and featured eight sculptural pieces inspired by Cinzano’s travels to mainland China. The pieces were crafted from recycled elm wood using traditional Chinese joinery techniques, held together with eco-friendly glue and finished with beeswax and natural lacquer. In contrast to his more “conservative” first collection, China Clean included details like hand-carved skulls and tattoo style motifs. Cinzano also collaborated with Shanghai-based Stellar Works to a create a recycled leather chair and table for the collection. The table and chair were designed as flat-pack pieces so that they could be transported with the smallest possible carbon footprint.

To: In 2015, Marone Cinzano launched his first solo exhibition titled China Clean at Hong Kong’s Pearl Lam Design Gallery on occasion of Art Basel Hong Kong. The exhibition featured eight made-in-China sculptural pieces, celebrating Chinese crafts and craftsmen met by Marone Cinzano during his visits to mainland China. The pieces were crafted from recycled elm wood using traditional Chinese joinery techniques. In contrast to his more “conservative” first collection, China Clean included details like hand-carved skulls and tattoo style motifs. Marone Cinzano also collaborated with Shanghai-based Stellar Works to a create recycled leather chairs and tables for the collection, which were designed as flat-pack pieces so that they could be transported with the smallest possible carbon footprint.

>>> Kindly edit the fourth paragraph of the Career section to make a minor change

From: At the Milan Design Week 2016, Cinzano unveiled Dondolo, a rocking chair made from salvaged Alfa Romeo car parts. The chair was sourced and made in Turin and inspired by his hometown’s industrial roots. Other 2016 works include Guiltless Bedspread and Clean Cover, which use recycled Astrakhan fur and cashmere woven from recycled yarn.

To: At the Milan Design Week 2016, Marone Cinzano unveiled Dondolo, a rocking chair made from salvaged Alfa Romeo car parts. The chair parts were sourced and made in Turin and inspired by his hometown’s industrial roots. Other 2016 works include Guiltless Bedspread and Clean Cover, which use recycled Astrakhan fur and cashmere woven from recycled yarn.

>>> Kindly edit the fifth paragraph of the Career section and add one line

From: In 2016, Cinzano applied the same ethos to architecture and interior design. He turned his London micro-apartment into what he calls a “healthful living space”. The lighting scheme is designed to replicate natural light during waking hours and create absolute darkness during sleeping hours. His has a mattress made from organic materials and coated the walls of his apartment with colloidal silver paint, an antibacterial product which Cinzano believes protects him from the electromagnetic fields produced by WiFi.

To:In 2016, Marone Cinzano started on a radical home improvement project on London micro-apartments to create homes that felt restorative, emphasizing removal of toxic elements, and using mostly recycled materials for the furniture and joinery as well as the latest light technologies to reduce interference with the circadian rhythms, and disinfection of the air and surfaces with UV lighting as opposed to household chemicals. In 2017, Marone Cinzano spoke at a TED conference in Kings College London to discuss health and well-being in the living space.

>>> Kindly edit the first paragraph of Family history section to add details

From: Cinzano’s maternal great grandfather was the founder of FIAT Automobiles, while his great-grandfather founded the Cinzano vermouth distillery. His step-grandmother, Infanta Maria Cristina de Borbon y Battenberg was a member of the Spanish royal family.

To: Marone Cinzano’s maternal great grandfather, Giovanni Agnelli was the founder of FIAT Automobiles, while his great-grandfather founded the Cinzano vermouth distillery. His step-grandmother, Infanta Maria Cristina de Borbon y Battenberg was a member of the Spanish royal family and daughter of spanish King Alfonso the XIII and Victoria Eugenie of Battenberg.

>>> Kindly change the Personal life section to correct his family name

From: On July 8, 1989, Cinzano married Princess Mafalda of Hesse-Cassel, a descendant of Queen Victoria, the couple have since separated. Cinzano lived in the Bacchus House in New York City where he was known for his glamorous and extravagant lifestyle. He sold the property to Napster founder and Facebook executive Sean Parker in 2011.

To: On July 8, 1989, Marone Cinzano married Princess Mafalda of Hesse-Cassel, a descendant of Queen Victoria, the couple have since separated. He lived in the Bacchus House in New York City where he was known for his glamorous and extravagant lifestyle. He sold the property to Napster founder and Facebook executive Sean Parker in 2011.

Other notes: I have made payment disclosure at the top of my edit request. Kindly consider to please remove the tag from the main page.

Rupeksha Jain (talk) 21:40, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

Reply 15-AUG-2019
Regards, Spintendo  03:38, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Portions of the proposed text were found to be insufficiently paraphrased from that source material. All additions to an article need to be placed using an editors own words and phrases, per WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE.
 * 2) Kindly revise the request, taking care to ensure that passages from sources are placed using your own words and phrases, and feel free to resubmit that request at your earliest convenience.
 * Just so that you're aware, the user making this request is part of a sizeable paid sockfarm (and is now blocked, needless to say). Good call on the decline; just mentioning this here in case you get any further requests along these lines. Yunshui 雲 水 08:24, 19 August 2019 (UTC)