Talk:Environmental Racism

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We give them a score of 9/10. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laurenallyce (talk • contribs) 16:49, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Peer Evaluation (from Eterica): In the grading rubric for the Wikipedia project, it says "a minimum of 3 sections must be added to the site" and I don't see any new sections in your sandbox. It's only a re-organized version of the old one. So, I would recommend adding 3 new sections. Perhaps you could organize your Background section a bit better so that it's not so long. Also some of your sections have different styles of referencing. I would suggest making all of these uniform. There are not enough figures or schematics added to the site. You may want to consider adding more of these. Overall, I think you've definitely organized it better and are on the right track!

Peer Eval From Laurenallyce: I think your page is looking really good. Be sure to proofread I found a few spelling errors. I would recommend watching the tone of your writing when discussing the different cases as Wikipedia is to be as neutral as possible. Be sure to show other points of views. As stated above, be sure you are following the rubric so you get as much credit as possible for your hard work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laurenallyce (talk • contribs) 23:54, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

Peer Evaluation from Rjniemer: The information included in your site is really thorough and helpful to any reader visiting your site. The one main issue I could see was with the background section. It is rather lengthy and could possibly be broken into more sections, by perhaps creating subsections in the background section? Other than a few coding issues as well I'd say you all are off to a really great start. The information is all there, so I would say just editing and organization could be improved. I really liked the Cases section of your page giving examples of environmental racism. Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rjniemer (talk • contribs) 03:15, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

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