Talk:Environmental causes of aviation stress

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First sentence, change “the main” to “a source of stress that comes from the environment is known as…” as it’s not the “main” source but one of many sources of stress. Some language/grammar issues that will be sorted out in the peer review process. Your sources look very good, but it is impossible for me to tell for sure where they all come from. They all need at least the following: Last name, First Initial (Year). Article title, Journal Title, Volume (Issue), Page numbers. Great start! Skearns4 (talk) 17:43, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi author:This page has very easy-to-read information, it seems very clear as in how it is organized i think the subsections are a bit short. It is very easy to understand but the layout makes it look like there isnt much information. so maybe adding some additional examples or info from reliable sources. I don't see the strong relation between subtopics, seems like just different reasons thrown into different paragraphs, wondering if it might help to relate one to another. i'm not too sure if they should, as I dont have too much experience with Wikipedia. Hope your page goes well!Wlin72 (talk) 20:49, 18 November 2015 (UTC)

This article provides clear facts by using useful and reliable sources. However, I believe you can edit more information in each sub-topics by using those sources and maybe explain how crew members are impacted by these stressors. Moreover, you can try looking for the past incidents that have occurred due to the environmental causes and relate your article better to the aviation industry. I also noticed that each paragraph is solely from one source; try to separate the usage of your sources. Generally, the writing style is good and it has been linked to many other articles! Hhur2 (talk) 21:34, 18 November 2015 (UTC)

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Link to my article
Environmental_causes_of_aviation_stress As aviation industry develops with high potential, people's interest in aviation increases. Although people use Wikipedia as a primary source for their search, there is not a lot of information about aviation in Wikipedia. Therefore, I decided to write an article about "Environmental cause of Aviation Stress". This article contains main five sources of environmental stress that affect pilot's performance and also how to minimize the influence. Dhur2 (talk) 07:38, 1 December 2015 (UTC)