Talk:Environmental issues in New York

You had provided enough background information about the environment issue we had faced in NY like waste disposal, pollutions, construction and all the other wastes. As you develop to your article, you ma add the cause and impact of these that exist around us and figure out if the government provide solutions to these issues. Mei0908 (talk) 16:53, 25 October 2016 (UTC)

The article had provided updates about both the cause and impact of the environment issues in NYS. The author illustrated how human cause the problem through both air and water pollutions and invasive species influence. The smelling of gasses and drinking contamination water impacted homeowners health and lead to sickness. Invasice species gave out the example spotted knapweed which can take over crop fields, limiting crop production and feed for livestock. I suggest to find information with statistic that increase the accuracy of the impact over these problems. Anyway, you made a great improve through your research and stretch out with supporting information. Mei0908 (talk) 04:13, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

Nice Job on describing this huge problem of environment in New York. I will suggest you add a little more about how can we fix the problem to stop it from getting worse and also what would you suggest the government do to resolve this problem.Yochoy (talk) 23:53, 12 November 2016 (UTC)Yochoy

The entry did well in providing the reasons for the environmental problems. The impact that it has on the environment as well. I suggest u change the format so it's easier to look at like add headings to seperate parts. It would be an improvement because it will help the reader know what each part is trying to say and it gives an organized look to the entry. The important thing missing from this entry is how we can improve the problems in the environment in New York. I think I will be able to use your great detail on your own topic and incorporate it into my own entry.Calkulated (talk) 05:56, 13 November 2016 (UTC)

The article was very well written and contained a lot of useful information. The one real problem I see is that it isn't in article form, which can be easily fixed. It needs a heading or two and the citations should be put in correctly. The problem is well demonstrated and provides good examples and sources. Overall, well done. MelanieChristy (talk) 15:32, 29 November 2016 (UTC)