Talk:Environmental threats to the Great Barrier Reef/GA1

GA Reassessment
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.'' As part of WikiProject Good articles' Project quality task force, all old good articles are being re-reviewed to ensure that they meet current good article criteria (as detailed at WP:WIAGA. Overall the article is very good, but I have determined that this article needs some upkeep to maintain its status, have some additional comments: I am putting the article on hold for seven days pending improvements. Please keep me appraised at this space. Thanks, Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 16:10, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * The biggest issue appearance wise is the use of "quasi-paragraphs"—groupings of one or two sentences do not make a real paragraph. These groupings need to be expanded, merged, or cut.
 * I think the WQ section was the biggest offender with this - I've reworked it. Hopefully this has eliminated this concern.  --Malkinann (talk) 20:42, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * The lead does not adequately cover the entire article; I think the second paragraph could be expanded a little more to explain what all these impacting factors actually are.
 * Have expanded the lead slightly, am unsure how to expand the second paragraph further without breaking the sentence. --Malkinann (talk) 20:42, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Some statements I do not think meet common knowledge requirements and should be sourced:
 * "Unlike most reef environments, the Great Barrier Reef is the only one worldwide where the water catchment area is home to industrialised urban areas and where extensive areas of coastal lands and rangelands have been used for agricultural and pastoral purposes."
 * Cut this. --Malkinann (talk) 20:42, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * "The coastline of north eastern Australia has no major rivers, (except during tropical flood events caused by tropical cyclones). It also has several major urban centres including Cairns, Townsville, Mackay, Rockhampton and the industrial city of Gladstone." is unsourced, but I'm guessing it's obvious enough to Aussies?
 * Futher research, embarrassingly enough, has revealed several major rivers which result in the water catchment for the GBR, but that they're only a major problem during flood/monsoonal periods. That the cities are in the GBR region should hopefully be obvious enough to Aussies and tourists alike. --Malkinann (talk) 20:42, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * In terms of organization, perhaps it would be best to group some of the related threats together (for example, predominantly or directly-human caused vs. environmental.)
 * The two main threats are at the top of the article, the others are lower down. Human-caused vs. environmental cannot be determined with some factors, for example, the COTS is a natural part of the reef ecosystem, but they are greatly exacerbated by poor water quality.  Also in general, cyclones could be said to be exacerbated by climate change.  --Malkinann (talk) 20:42, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * File:Sea Temperature and Bleaching of the Great Barrier Reef.jpg is missing important info like author/date/source.
 * I don't know why, but we were linking to a local copy rather than the fully annotated copy on WP:COMMONS. --Malkinann (talk) 20:42, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
 * I've worked on the lead a bit to break it up into a real paragraph, you should double check it. Other than that you've addressed all my issues... I'll pass the article now. Thanks for the prompt response. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 14:02, 25 November 2009 (UTC)