Talk:Eoghan O'Connell/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Lead

 * Remove the second wikilink for Bury in the first paragraph as it is not necessary
 * Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Celtic

 * "O'Connell played for the academy teams of the Irish clubs College Corinthians and Avondale United," reword to O'Connell played for the College Corinthians and Avondale United Irish academy teams,
 * "Commenting about the new contract, he said "I'm delighted and just happy to get it done"." - a comma is needed between "said" and "I'm"
 * "manager Brendan Rodgers said O'Connell was outstanding and added;" - outstanding should be in quotations otherwise it should be replaced with a neutral word
 * "He made his debut in a 4–1 victory over Sheffield United;" - He debuted in a 4-1 victory over Sheffield United;
 * Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Bury

 * "On 8 June 2017, O'Connell signed a three-year contract with English League One club Bury" - try O'Connell signed a three-year contract with English League One club Bury on 8 June 2017.
 * "O'Connell was injured during the pre-season and was ruled out of play for 10 months." - add the specific type of injury O'Connell sustained
 * "1–0 victory over Blackburn Rovers in the EFL Trophy." - the EFL Trophy link should be to 2017–18 EFL Trophy and not to the tournament in general
 * Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

International career

 * "for the qualifiers of 2017 UEFA European Under-21 Championship against Slovenia and Serbia." -reword to for the 2017 UEFA European Under-21 Championship qualifiers against Slovenia and Serbia.
 * Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Style of play

 * "His manager at Celtic, Brendan Rodgers," - Brendan Rodgers doesn't need to be wikilinked here
 * Same issue about linking with when Celtic is first mentioned
 * Done. 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Personal life

 * "Other notable family members include his grandfather Frankie O'Connell, who served as a board delegate on the Cork County board for many years." - needs to be citated to a reliable source.
 * Removed.16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)