Talk:Episode 210

GA review

 * GA review (see here for criteria)

For the most part, the article is good. However, the writing needs a little work in some areas, and there are slight POV issues as well. Until these isses are adderessed, I've put the article On-hold. Thank you for your work in improving this article thus far, and good luck in improving it to GA status. Juliancolton The storm still blows...  19:31, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * Well, first, During the flashback sequences featuring Jack and C.C. trying to arrange meetings while C.C. is at work, it appears the characters are appearing on a fictional television channel named G-Span, an obvious reference to C-Span. is not neutral. "An obvious reference to..." is a POV. Also, the first sentence is awkward. Juliancolton The storm still blows...  01:34, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
 * It's starting to look better, and it's almost there. I think a final copyedit would do it. Julian ( Leap Day 2008 ) 22:45, 29 February 2008 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

It has been improved since I first reviwed it, and it now passes GA.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
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Ratings section
The ratings section states that it was up against many television serial's repeats or second-halfs. I feel that its not valid to compare a half hour episode to second half of an one-hour episode....so i deleted the sentence and moved the ratings sentence to previous section. Gprince007 (talk) 15:31, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Page name
This page needs to be moved: Episode 210 is not a good title for the tenth episode of the second season of 30 Rock. Can someone suggest a more descriptive title? Geometry guy 19:44, 10 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Wait till the DVD comes out and see what they list it as. If it's "Untitled", maybe go with Untitled (30 Rock)? Not sure till then. — 97198   talk  05:23, 18 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I'd be more inclined to be upfront about it with a title like "Episode 10 (30 Rock, season 2)" or even "30 Rock, season 2, episode 10". Geometry guy 14:58, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

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