Talk:Episode 5 (Twin Peaks)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:23, 8 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox: Production code?
 * Didn't add one; to be honest I'm seeing less use for them as I go on. If you think it's important I could dig it up. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: You need to mention the episode's broadcast and ratings per WP:LEDE
 * Already there—"First airing on May 10, 1990, "Episode 5" was viewed by approximately 18 percent of the available audience during its broadcast; it has received positive reviews from critics." GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Federal Bureau of Investigation should be simply "FBI"
 * Sure? Done. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: Merge shorter paragraphs where possible
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Unlink Twin Peaks there per WP:REPEATLINK
 * Not done, that's the only instance of the link in the article body. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "ABC Network" write out fully then have (ABC) upon first mention
 * Written as "American Broadcast Company" now. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: A− needs quotation marks around
 * Got it. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Why do some references have publishers, and some don't. Choose one method please.
 * Added. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

TBrandley 16:36, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Think I've addressed everything now. GRAPPLE   X  05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Passing. TBrandley 23:07, 4 October 2012 (UTC)