Talk:Episode 6 (Twin Peaks)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 03:56, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

That's all I can find. On hold for seven days.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:07, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I feel that the intro should go Plot, Production, Ratings; rather than Production, Plot, Ratings
 * How's it look now? GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * "in the small mountain town" Maybe add, Twin Peaks, just to be clear
 * Added. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * "local businessman Benjamin Horne (Beymer) schemes to burn down its sawmill to further his property empire." -> "local businessman Benjamin Horne (Beymer) schemes to burn down his sawmill to further his property empire."
 * Oh, it's not his. He just wants to buy the land cheap after he burns it. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * "…its broadcast; and has received positive reviews from critics." -> "its broadcast. The episode has received positive reviews from critics."
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Maybe add (FBI) after Federal Bureau of Investigation, so that you can use the acronym later?
 * Sure. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * "difficult to write for convincingly than others" -> "difficult to convincingly write for than others"
 * Got it. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * A−, make that "A−" in quotes
 * Got one. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * If you want to make the page super-sexy, you can add publishers to some of the refs, but you don't have to
 * Think I've got them all.
 * Is "Bibliography" the right heading if you include a featurette?
 * Hmm, that's why I generally go for "references"; guess that slipped in somewhere and has been copied since. Fixed now. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, chief. Hope Monday goes grand for you. GRAPPLE   X  17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Excellent. Everything looks in order. As for Monday, I can now recite the entire meaning of Catullus 16, so I'm feeling better. And the best part is, its dirty. ;)-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   17:41, 15 September 2012 (UTC)