Talk:Epworth by the Sea

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If anyone has suggestions as to how I could possibly improve my article, that would be a great help. I have tried to add more internal links and re-arranged the format a bit, but I am not quite sure how my article sounds like an advertisement. I am not trying to promote anything with this, I simply just provided as much factual information as I could. Thank You so much, I am new to this.

=Suggestions= Overall you did a great job on your article. You have great third party resources. Maybe to "wikifi" your page you could put all the information under your Epworth by the Sea architectural features together instead of just being listed. Hope this helps. —Preceding unsigned comment added by TaylorJones21 (talk • contribs) 13:20, 20 July 2010 (UTC)