Talk:Equine gastric ulcer syndrome

I feel strongly that this contribution needs major editing because: 1) in its present form it does not adequately describe the complexity of the individual, causally unrelated, specific disease processes that comprise this syndrome; 2) it contains a number of serious factual errors, either because of misinterpretation of the available information or presentation of facts for which there is no credible documentation; 3) the majority of references cited are not the primary source of the specific information that is presented, which is a disservice to the readers and the researchers who did the original studies. The proposed editing will attempt to adequately redress these issues. (EquiDocG (talk) 15:50, 13 June 2015 (UTC))


 * Go for it. Glad to assist you with formatting and structure, the big thing is to read WP:CITE to add or update sources.  The only caveat I will add is to not remove citations that are already there - if they are accurate.  The Horse reports on many studies and is a reliable source that is readable by a layperson, though of course if you can cite to the original study, that's fantastic and definitely welcomed.   Montanabw (talk)  06:29, 14 June 2015 (UTC)