Talk:Equity and inclusion in education

The article introduces the topic in a very clear and concise way. The wording is very neutral and provides unbiased information through the selected sources. The sources range from government agencies to research articles that help demonstrate the depth of the topic of the article. There are a variety of links used to help support the article that could be turned into Wikipedia pages themselves, or linked into this article to further expand on the topic.

There are a lot of definition links including one to a youtube video for ‘equality’. I don’t think that this link is needed. Context for the ‘Target 4’ and its relevance based on the UN not having any actual power in education is needed, perhaps change the word ‘determined’ to ‘recommended’.

Double check what terms actually need a definition link. The term ‘policy’ is used in a lot of other Wikipedia articles and is only linked when referring to a specific policy. Check for grammar as the use of ‘and’ more than once in a sentence leads to run-on sentences.

Equity and Inclusion in Education is connected to the article written on ‘Digital Divide in Education’. The topic of equity is central to understanding the gaps in the education caused by access to reliable technology in most education systems. This article helps articulate why Equity and Inclusion are essential issues and the breath of their affect on student learning.

BucketBridge234 (talk) 20:25, 28 November 2021 (UTC)