Talk:Erik Rhodes (pornographic actor)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 19:48, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Review coming soon. Paparazzzi (talk) 19:48, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * I think you can expand more the lead section
 * Noted his cause of death in the lead.

Biography

 * Ref 3 says Erik was also a go-go dancer
 * Added
 * Isn't there any info about where Erik studied, information about his parents or something about his family?
 * I don't think so; the NYT obit seems to be the only real mainstream, reliable coverage of his life.
 * You should include reviews and commentary about Erik's performances, for both of his porn and non-pornographic works
 * Not sure where I could find reviews of that nature, let alone reviews that would be deemed permissible as a reliable source.
 * You may expand about Erik's nominations on numerous awards, because the section doesn's specify the awards' names
 * Sorry, I'm not sure what this note means. The award names are listed under "Award" in the table.
 * "the 2007 film The Ivy League, for which he won two Grabby Awards." the source doesn't list Erik as a winner, not even as a nominee
 * It's there, you just have to click "Performers" in the "Category" menu.
 * Include information about Erik's personal life
 * Can you be more specific?
 * " Since 2008 he was in a committed, romantic relationship with a man named Anthony.[19]" Facebook isn't the most reliable source, find a better one. Also, you may include they broke up shortly before Erik's death, since ref 1 says: "...the breakup of his four year relationship earlier this year."
 * Removed, looks like this was added to the article randomly at some pint
 * Can you find a better source to Erik's appearance on Dedication? Apparently, his scenes were edited out, but there are no other sources talking about the matter
 * Unfortunately, I could not find another source for this claim.

Verdict

 * Putting this on hold. I think in general that there's a little more info that can be added, which can be done within seven days. Regards. Paparazzzi (talk) 21:48, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking up this GAR; I'll respond to your comments in the next few days. Morgan695 (talk) 22:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Initial comments above. I've responded the best I can, though reliable sources on pornographic performers tend to be limited. Morgan695 (talk) 21:43, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I'm giving this a ✅. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 04:17, 9 January 2022 (UTC)