Talk:Ernest Garcia II

Lede info
I trimmed the lede so the the felony conviction remains, but without the details regarding the charges: "on charges of bank fraud" as those details are expounded upon later in the article. The descriptor "convicted felon" is sufficient for the lede of this BLP. Also, from a grammatical POV, it also make the list-in-a-series read better.Writethisway (talk) 20:35, 27 June 2020 (UTC)