Talk:Ernest Hemingway/Archive 3

Pilar
A new article has been created specifically about Hemingway's boat Pilar and aspects of his life aboard and relative to the boat. Please review and contribute as you see fit.Peteycat (talk) 14:05, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

Debasement of words
The article notes that "Zoe Trodd believes Hemingway crafted skeletal sentences in response to Henry James's observation that World War I had 'used up words'."

Hemingway offered his own explanation in A Farewell to Arms, via protagonist Henry:


 * "I was always embarrassed by the words sacred, glorious, and sacrifice and the expression in vain. We had heard them ... and had read them, on proclamations that were slapped up by billposters over other proclamations, now for a long time, and I had seen nothing sacred, and the things that were glorious had no glory and the sacrifices were like the stockyards at Chicago if nothing was done with the meat except to bury it. There were many words that you could not stand to hear and finally only the names of places had dignity. Certain numbers were the same way and certain dates and these with the names of the places were all you could say and have them mean anything. Abstract words such as glory, honor, courage or hallow were obscene beside the concrete names of villages, the numbers of roads, the names of rivers, the numbers of regiments and the dates."

This is a trenchant observation about the numbness induced by the enormous losses of World War I. For example, say "Verdun" and you have spoken volumes. Perhaps this passage might be included in the article.

It seems to me that Hemingway's iceberg approach to style may also reflect his background in the better traditions of American journalism, in which descriptions of large events are left to speak for themselves without emotional embroidery. I believe this is sometimes known as the plain style. Sca (talk) 22:23, 20 March 2012 (UTC)


 * That's very nice - I'll have to re-read Farewell. What if we use as much as we can from that passage in the second text box in the style section? Truthkeeper (talk) 23:48, 20 March 2012 (UTC)


 * That would be fine. I thought of that, too, but decided to leave editing the article to someone more knowledgeable about Hemingway. The existing selection in that box does illustrate his style all right, but out of context it's not particularly striking. I find his reportorial style has a cumulative effect that builds up as you journey through the book.Sca (talk) 12:44, 23 March 2012 (UTC)


 * I'd need a citation to add it because I don't have a copy of Farewell, with pub date, page numbers and isbn. Presumably the copy you have has been published by Scribner's. If you add those here, I'll reformat the blue box. I do like the passage above. And yes, his style, although seemingly simple, does have a cumulative effect. Truthkeeper (talk) 15:13, 23 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately, I returned the copy I was reading to a local 'free' library, in a coffee shop in Boise. Perhaps someone else can supply a citation? Sorry.... Sca (talk) 01:39, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks Sca. When I have a chance, I'll pick up a copy in the library and try to find the passage. Truthkeeper (talk) 02:50, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Coincidentally, I have that section bracketed in my copy. My copy is a "First Scribner paperback edition 2003" & ISBN 978-0-684-80146-9, pages 184-5. Let me know if you need any other info to cite it. Killiondude (talk) 06:35, 30 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much - I think that will do it! Will format it a bit later today. Truthkeeper (talk) 11:15, 30 March 2012 (UTC)
 * I forgot about this, but found my own copy of it today - same page numbers, so thanks so much for those. Doing it now. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:35, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

The Complete Poems
There is now a stub "The Complete Poems" (no italics) about a posthumous book of poems by Hemingway, edited by Nicholas Gerogiannis.

That book (LOC catalog entry) is the 1992 Bison Books revised edition of 88 Poems (1979). Perhaps the latter would be a better article title. Neither edition of book is mentioned in this biography, nor is the editor.

The article is now an orphan. One hour ago there were four in-links, two from article space which I have corrected and two from one Wikiproject master list which survive. All were mis-targeted, intending the complete poems of another poet. (The article title is poorly chosen. Probably this should be a disamb. like Selected Poems and Collected Poems.) --P64 (talk) 20:25, 7 April 2012 (UTC)


 * There are other articles like that floating around that I keep stumbling across. They all need to be brought to the Ernest Hemingway bibliography. The volumes of early poems have been mentioned in background sections of In Our Time and in Big Two-Hearted River. If it's not here, certainly something should be mentioned about the first volume, which was the first thing he had published. The posthumous work should stay in the bibliography page until someone tackles a separate page about the fact that more has been published posthumously (briefly mentioned in True at First Light) since his death than during his lifetime.  If the title is wrong it should be changed and maybe a copy of the book's cover uploaded. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:53, 7 April 2012 (UTC)


 * The title is accurate. Above I have fixed the link to its catalog entry.
 * I believe it is inappropriate. Such titles should be reserved for disambiguation, not for substantial articles. --P64 (talk) 18:51, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Conversion
hello,

the article states that he converted to Roman Catholicism, but there is no mention from what denomination he converted. GoP T C N 13:24, 1 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Will add. Have to drag out some sources. Truthkeeper (talk) 02:00, 2 May 2012 (UTC)

Pio Baroja
Because Basque writer Pio Baroja? Pio Baroja is a Spanish writer (born in the Basque country is also Spain. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.120.149.231 (talk) 22:16, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Classics?
The first paragraph of the first section notes how many of his books were published in his lifetime, and how many others were published posthumously. Then the paragraph ends, "Many of these are considered classics of American literature." I have two concerns: first, this claim is unsourced (although it should be easy to find a source) and second, placing this sentence at the end suggests that the posthumous books are those considered as classics, rather than those written in his lifetime. I suggest that this sentence, if it remains at all, should be put between the sentences listing the number of his works published before, and after, 1960, to reflect which of his works are more highly regarded. Or, the last sentence itself could simply be removed.Catherinejarvis (talk) 20:54, 4 June 2012 (UTC)

Suicide Edit Request
The line I want to change is “Two days later, in the early morning hours of July 2, 1961, Hemingway “quite deliberately” shot himself with his favorite shotgun" and I want to add this after shotgun, that was purchased from the outdoor retailer Abercrombie & Fitch.”

What would be the point of adding the retailer's name? It seems to serve no purposeCatherinejarvis (talk) 20:59, 4 June 2012 (UTC)


 * I dunno. At the time, it was the Cadillac of shotguns and the kind of weapon Hemingway would own. I don't know if it's important enough to go into the bio. I'll see what I can do. S  B Harris 01:43, 5 June 2012 (UTC)

Hemingway's 1954 Plane Crash(es)
Jeffrey K. Walker, 9 Jun 12

I'd like to change the following sentence in the first section. The current sentence reads:

Shortly after the publication of The Old Man and the Sea in 1952, Hemingway went on safari to Africa, where he was almost killed in a plane crash that left him in pain or ill-health for much of the rest of his life.

In fact, Hemingway was involved in TWO back-to-back plane crashes in January 1954. I'd recommend this sentence be changed to read:

Not long after the publication of The Old Man and the Sea, Hemingway went on safari to Africa, where he was involved in two plane crashes on 23 January 1954. The first occurred on a sightseeing flight near Murchison Falls in Uganda, after which Hemingway and his wife were rescued by a boat carrying tourists to the Falls and delivered to a village on Lake Albert. They were then picked up by a rescue plane, which crashed and burned on takeoff, although all aboard were able to escape. Hemingway's serious injuries from these crashes left him in pain or ill-health for much of the rest of his life.

I offer as substantiation, besides the mention of both crashes in several biographical sources, the original New York Times/AP article of 25 Jan 54. (Not sure how to attach or forward this source, but the URL is http://www.nytimes.com/books/99/07/04/specials/hemingway-safe.html) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jwalk1230 (talk • contribs) 19:54, 9 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Good catch! I think you're correct that the lead should be changed to mention that Hemingway suffered "two successive plane crashes" in place of "a plane crash".  However, both crashes are already explained in great detail later in the article under the section "Cuba and the Nobel Prize", with many sources.  The purpose of the lead section (per WP:LEAD) is to summarize the entire article.  The lead is already quite lengthy, so I think adding the details about where the crashes happened and the exact details is unneeded.  For more info, all one has to do is read the rest of the article.  Thanks!  María ( yllo  submarine ) 00:50, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Change made to the lead here. María ( yllo submarine ) 00:52, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
 * He sustained minor injuries from the first accident; severe injuries from the second, just to clarify. It's described in detail in True at First Light (complete with sources, etc.). Anyway, Maria, thanks for adding. I'd taken the page off my watchlist. Truthkeeper (talk) 11:52, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * No worries! Granted, it's probably one of those situations that isn't easily distilled into a few words; there were two plane crashes, not one, but he was only severely injured in the 2nd crash, etc., etc.  Maybe my band-aid isn't big enough?  Should it be reworded further? María ( yllo  submarine ) 12:24, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * To be honest, I haven't even looked yet. I'll have a look this evening. I'd wanted to try to shove as much specific biographical detail into other pages and keep this more of a summary, but without looking, yes, it should say he was in two accidents. I thought it did at one point, so I may need to trawl the history too. Truthkeeper (talk) 14:52, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, Maria, your band-aid is fine and thanks. The details are in the "Cuba and the Nobel Prize" section. That was a good catch. Truthkeeper (talk) 21:19, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

PARIS addresses
The rented room (fn 27 Wiki article) was on the top floor of the hotel where Verlain died (A Moveable Feast ch.1). That address is 39 rue Descartes, Paris. His address (fn 29 Wiki article) was 113 rue Notre-Dame-des-Champs, which at the time had a sawmill at ground level. Pound lived at 70bis (A Movable Feast Ch.9)Amazeking (talk) 02:00, 27 September 2012 (UTC)

Married someone after the last time he saw her?
I got very confused at the end of the ww2 section with this bit;

"The last time he saw her was in March 1945 as he was preparing to return to Cuba."

Cuba and the Nobel Prize

''Hemingway said he "was out of business as a writer" from 1942 to 1945. In 1946 he married Mary, who had an ectopic pregnancy five months later.''

I'm afraid I know nothing about the subject, but if someone could make that a bit more obvious as to what happened?--91.212.94.5 (talk) 14:53, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Apologies, signed properly.--Flibble (talk) 14:55, 10 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Don't worry about the signing and thank you very much for pointing this out. It was an abrupt transition that didn't make sense and a sentence seems to have been deleted at some point but now it's all been fixed. Thanks for taking the time to read and to comment. Truthkeeper (talk) 19:47, 12 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks for fixing this :) --Flibble (talk) 13:31, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Photo caption in "Paris" section
The six people sitting around the café table have all been identified: Hemingway (left), with Harold Loeb, Lady Duff Twysden (in hat), Hadley Richardson Hemingway, Donald Ogden Stewart (obscured), and Pat Guthrie (far right) at a café in Pamplona, Spain, July 1925. Twysden, Loeb and Guthrie inspired the characters Brett Ashley, Robert Cohn, and Mike Campbell in The Sun Also Rises. Can someone add this info to the caption, please? --108.45.72.196 (talk) 17:33, 24 January 2013 (UTC)

minuscule error correction
The correct spelling for the church is Notre-Dame des Champs. No circumflex accent. I am a native French speaker and this just caught my eye... Harpagnon (talk) 21:51, 24 January 2013 (UTC)Harpagnon


 * Right you are. It's gone. Thanks! Favonian (talk) 22:00, 24 January 2013 (UTC)

Edit request on 20 April 2013
Remove the comma following "became paranoid" in the "Idaho and Suicide section" because it's not needed.

86.13.119.172 (talk) 19:12, 20 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks, done. Truthkeeper (talk) 19:29, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

What decorations?
On the 1918 photo, Hemingway wear medal bars that would be interesting to learn more about. From what I know, he received the Bronze Star Medal in 1947, the Italian Medal for Bravery in silver in 1918 and the slightly less ranking Italian War Cross in 1918. I have seen photos on a glass display showing Austrian (???) Medals and others in the Hemingway House. Are they his medals, when was he awarded them and why is the Italian bravery medal well mentioned but not the Austrian? The ribands for these medals do not match the ribbons on the photos. Here is work that need to be done... 85.230.202.224 (talk) 22:46, 15 May 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi, the description of the photograph is here at the John F. Kennedy Library where it's held in the Hemingway archives. It's not much of a description and I image if the curators there knew more they might have added more. He's wearing his volunteer uniform - and I'd agree that perhaps the ribbon is for the Italian War Cross. When I get a chance, I'll look through his biographies to see what's said about the Austrian medal. Thanks for posting. Truthkeeper (talk) 01:01, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Hemingway's categories
I've placed Hemingway in and, and before reverting I'd ask that you read, WP:Categorization, which states things should be placed in the most specific sub-cat (except for non-diffusing categories like those related to gender/ethnicity). is currently under discussion for deletion/merging, so further, no-one should be removed from this cat while the discussion is ongoing per policy, but you are welcome to add others to it. Because of Hemingway's status as a pre-eminent American novelist, he should also be categorized in a way in line with wikipedia policy, and if that means he's no longer in the much vaunted head-cat, that will hopefully dispel some of the drama that suggests you haven't made it until you're in that head cat (when in fact, the head cat is really just a holding ground for people still needing to be diffused to more specific cats). --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 13:26, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually, he was just added to the men category on April 26 and was removed almost immediately - that was the bold edit that needs consensus first. Stating that no one can be removed from the category but that people can be added is, quite frankly, gaming. The 20th-century category is neither here nor there, and I'd love to hear further opinions from those who worked on the article. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:04, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Reverting. It certainly doesn't need consensus - that category is valid, and currently under discussion, so should be populated. Are you disputing whether he belongs in that category? Same thing for 20th century - your opinion on whether you like it or not is irrelevant, if the cat is valid it must be kept. If you don't like the 20th century cat, nominate it for deletion.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 14:24, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * You claimed BRD for your initial edit, but it was the addition of those categories that was bold - you've been reverted, you need consensus. That the category is currently under discussion is no reason to populate it, and there's no default-to-include rule for categories. As for the 20th-century cat, I have no desire to nominate it for deletion, I simply would like to hear some other opinions about its inclusion here. Please allow that discussion to happen. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Hmm. Population of cats under discussion is exceedingly common, and very much the norm. I also look forward to the arguments as to whether he is indeed a 20th century novelist and a man. There's no such thing as "well, he qualifies for inclusion in the category, but WP:IDONTLIKEIT." --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 14:42, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Per header on and guidance here Categories_for_discussion "Unless the change is non-controversial (such as vandalism or a duplicate), please do not remove the category from pages before the community has made a decision.", categories should not be removed which are currently under discussion. User:Nikkimaria has removed this category several times. Can anyone provide any reason why Hemingway is not a member of ? --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 14:58, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Ignoring for a moment the mess that's recently cropped up, the creation of last October (without consensus or notifying Wikiproject Novels) the subsequent depopulation of  and the newly created  (again, against consensus and without notification to the relevant wikiproject. Hemingway was the following: from the beginning of his career to his death a journalist, hence ; a short story writer, hence . He wrote nonfiction, some of which was published during his life time (Death in the Afternoon) some after his death - True at First Light is an example of a book published posthumously and depending on which manuscript, which editor, which edition, has been variously described as fiction and non-fiction. He wrote a memoir published after his death, hence ; he wrote extensively for magazines - fiction and non-fiction - and in fact right before his death was working on an a piece for Life magazine. And during his lifetime he had five novels published and two works that have variously been described as novels and novellas. He won the Nobel Prize in Literature for the second of those - The Old Man and the Sea. After his death he had a further two, possibly three, novels published (depending on whether True at First Light is truly a novel. His work does not fit into a genre and thus cannot be diffused to mystery, horror, fantasy, historical, etc. He simply wrote novels. In my view, he needs to be identified as an American novelist. If we look at the history of the article, here in 2004 he was simply identified as an American writer and a novelist and that's absolutely right. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:21, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, but *if* the category American men novelists continues to exist, do you not accept that he belongs, in the same way that Maya Angelou is an American female novelist? If the cat fits, wear it. Don't you think it would be odd to have this world famous category called American men novelists (ack!) but Hemingway *isn't* in it? Could you imagine the NY times article about that one? We don't have male gendered categories for short story writers, journalists, etc, but we *do* have one for novelists, so we don't really have a choice whether to use it or not.
 * Now if the male novelists cat is deleted, then there's no use complaining - but if it is kept, he must be placed in it, otherwise the cat itself has no meaning. I don't know why people don't realize that being in a subcategory still implies membership in the parent.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 21:39, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * I wouldn't compare Hemingway to Angelou; best to stay away from the OTHERSTUFF argument. In my view the men novelist category is an artificial category and artificially created. My comment at the CfD was called an "assertion" so I struck it. But, a number of good editors have made comments on various pages with which I agree, most notably Newyorkbrad and Jayen. I think we need to take a fresh look at the category situation rather than accusing me of complaining. I know what I'm trying to say but to be honest I'm in the middle on a very difficult two weeks at work, am tired, and won't be editing again until I crawl out from under work. Perhaps someone better than I am can articulate better and discuss better. Thanks. Truthkeeper (talk) 00:07, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

I think some overlap should be permitted in these categories. Nobody would object to EH being called an American man novelist (though it sounds odd-- why not American male novelist?), if he can also be listed simply as an American novelist. He's a member of both categories. Is the 20th century non-diffusing? This "non diffusing" business is very dubious because the rules are not evenly applied. We do not have American man Nobel Prize winners, so why in the world are we stuck with American man novelists? It's not a category size issue as it only cuts the cat size in half. Then there's the funny business of "ethnicity". Why is "American" accepted as Hemingway's ethnicity, and not English-American? Ralph Ellison (for example) is listed simply as an African-American novelist AND an American man novelist, so why can EH be listed simply also as an English-American novelist? If EH were reading all this, he'd doubtless comment acidly that we should create a category soley for "one-eyed quarter-Portuguese-American bastard men novelists", in order to give Dos Passos one entirely to himself. S B Harris 02:35, 4 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi Sbharris. A few responses
 * is currently under discussion for merging or keeping - it's not closed yet. I've voted myself to have it renamed as you suggest, but we have to wait till that discussion closes. In such cases as a CFD, categories are not supposed to be removed from articles until the discussion closes. You should weigh in on the discussion.
 * diffuses - This is an unambiguous diffusion, a classic case, as you're taking the same exact concept, and just getting more specific in terms of time frame. It would be very odd for  to not diffuse - we have hundreds of categories like this all over the wiki, and these sort of by-century cats always diffuse the parent - see, , for example (notice: no articles in the parent). My argument is, since he's in , he shouldn't be in the parent, per WP:Categorization. No-one has provided a policy- or guidance-based argument to counter this yet.
 * As for ethnicity, we don't have - per WP:EGRS, such ethnicity/job intersections are only created where one can justify that it is a subject of special study. african-American novelists apparently are, but English-American, less so. Note: I didn't write these rules (or even necessarily agree with them), nor create these categories, I'm just working with what I have in front of me and the guidance that the community has decided on for categorization.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 04:56, 4 May 2013 (UTC)

Proposal
I propose to add the following categories:
 * - diffuses American journalists
 * For that matter, you might as well put in for exactly the same reason. This diffuses out American writers.
 * nb: He's already in which is a sub-cat of  - Obi
 * Technically wrong. Illinois is as far as we want to go. Rather than ghettoizing him, the erroneous origin would suburbanize him. But Oak Park is a separate township municipality and not a suburb. It's next door but not part of Chicago; not when EH was born and not now.
 * Traditionally, the from doesn't mean where you were born, it just means a place where you spent some time - but in any case, I agree, this could be made more generic. I've modified the proposal accordingly. (FWIW, it wasn't me who put him in chicago, so don't shoot the messenger) -Obi
 * But aside from a few boyhood trips to the Fields Museum, EH spent only a little time in Chicago in 1920-21 (living for a while there after he married) and did no writing there. Of course he was born in Oak Park, went to Oak Park High, and then he left to go to Italy. He went to Chicago after returning from the war, but soon (1922) went to Paris and ignored Chicago ever after, including in his writing. The city seems to have made no impression on him. Actually, would be more appropriate for EH than, and both of these are, of course, just wrong. Much as Chicago would like to claim him.  S  B Harris 04:17, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Perhaps you hadn't noticed that I had already moved the Chicago cat to the "delete" column, and proposed placing him in writers from Illinois instead? Writers from Paris is also probably a fair one to consider - he certainly is associated with Paris in my mind. - Obi
 * Perhaps you hadn't noticed that I had already moved the Chicago cat to the "delete" column, and proposed placing him in writers from Illinois instead? Writers from Paris is also probably a fair one to consider - he certainly is associated with Paris in my mind. - Obi


 * - sourced in article
 * - If he's a hunter, he's also certainly a fisher
 * No. He could be a hunter without being a fisher and many people are. EH himself was of course famous for both. One could argue that all fishers are hunters (the other way around) but this requires a somewhat nonstandard definition of hunter, where the connotation of the word almost always is hunter of mammals, not fish.
 * Sorry, what I meant to say is, if we put him in the hunters category, we should certainly put him in the fishers category. i think it's fair to say that both fishing and hunting are defining for this fellow. -Obi


 * - diffuses American novelists
 * Yes, but my only problem is the century thing isn't an ideal diffusive category due to being somewhat vague for some people (Kipling is both a 19th-century British writer and a 20th century British writer also, Joseph Conrad is both a Polish and a Bitish novelist and writer). Those things suggest to me that time of writing (vs. say year of birth) should probably be treated as a non-diffusive subcategory. It's not vague for Hemingway who worked exclusively in the 20th century, but it's the principle of the thing. It sets a bad precident by shoehorning in yet another subcategory which isn't always so clear and certainly requires duplication for some.
 * The definition used is clear and standardized - it's about when these people were active and publishing - and people could thus cross centuries. It's not a problem to be in multiple categories - Kipling being a great example. Writers-by-century categories are diffusing in every other part of the tree, I'm not sure why it would be different here. diffusing doesn't mean you only belong in one sub-category - it just means you belong to at least one.-Obi


 * - non-diffusing subcat of American novel[ist]s. Currently under discussion at CFD, and per CFD rules, categories under discussion are not to be removed from articles, no matter what one's personal opinion.
 * It's not my personal opinion. It's the guideline at WP:CAT that gender shouldn't be used a diffusive category. Thus you can use (though I would prefer male American novelists) so long as this doesn't take out American novelists.
 * nb: I agree with the rename, the cat is currently under discussion - if it survives, I also hope it's renamed. i fixed the above, I should have said it doesn't diffuse, which is according to guidelines. -Obi


 * - diffuses non-diffusing subcat of Anti-fascists
 * For this one at least I have the same comment that it's not clear why somebody made that particular category, and not . Is anti-fascist a proper diffusing subset of Roman Catholics, or the reverse? Or either of them? Even in the Spanish Civil war? Why so? For example, is a clear subset and subcategory of  but it's used in WP:DUPCAT as an example of an improper subcat to use as a diffuser. There are toll bridges and non-toll brdiges in NYC and there are have been pro- and anti- fascists among Roman Catholics. (See Spanish Civil War). But in both cases, so what?
 * This is an intersection cat - it intersects both anti-fascists and roman catholics. I didn't create the category, but he fits in it... If you think that particular category doesn't make sense, you should nominate it for deletion. -Obi
 * You miss the point. It's a valid subcategory, yes, but a proper diffusing subcategory is one that is clear and comprehensive and parses out all the parts of the parent category. Else what's the point of WP:DUPCAT? If you won't admit existence of any valid subcategories that are NOT diffusing except the ones clearly labeled here (gender, ethnicity, blah), then give me an example of one you wouldn't consider that is NOT one of those. I'm simply saying that while it is not wrong (aside from the Catholic problem) to call Hemingway a Roman Catholic anti-fascist or American anti-fascist, or whatever, putting in these in place of the single categories adds nothing to calling him separately a 1) Roman Catholic 2) anti-fascist who 3) hails from Illinois and is called American is a half-dozen other categories. Number of categories are the same, but of course there exist 3 different combos of any 2 of these 3 characteristics (American, anti-fascist, Catholic), and you now want 2 of these 3, but not the third (American Roman Catholics) and you also don't want a category with all 3 (American Roman Catholic anti-fascists). None of this makes sense. He was Anti-fascist, American, and nominally Catholic. Do any combo you like, but none of them help. S  B Harris 01:50, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah ok, I see your point - sorry I had just been using "diffuses" in a more generic sense to mean it sub-cats-off-of, but yes you're right, in this case, religion should not *actually* diffuse. There are other examples of non-diffusing cats - for example, under novelists, you have Nobel prize winners - but that should not diffuse, because you don't want people hived off *only* into that category.
 * In any case, we should respect the wisdom of the crowds here - if someone thinks the category is valid, then we should fill it up. If not, we should propose it for deletion. Just leaving it ignored is not a good idea IMHO. And perhaps it doesn't add additional information, for anyone browsing categories, it *does* add information. Your solution, of using more generic higher-level facets, requires category intersection - I've proposed a prototype of how this might work here - thoughts welcome Wikipedia_talk:Category_intersection -obi


 * - diffuses anti-fascists
 * This one looks a bit more natural. But again, not really obvious. S  B Harris 22:52, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Which part is not obvious? diffusion by country is quite standard. Note that we need this cat - if we don't have it, otherwise poor Papa will be ghettoized by religion in the anti-fascists tree. -Obi
 * Well then, take out the religion and leave these single categories which logically have 4 separate possible combos, the existence of which all are obviously and speak for themselves. There was, BTW, nothing odd about being an anti-fascist American Catholic in the late 1930's when EH was covering the Spanish Civil War. It was being an anti-fascist Spanish Catholic that got you into trouble (Catholic Party had been absorbed by the Republicans). Just to make things difficult for you (and why shouldn't I?), there's a technical and non-negotiable definition of who is, and who isn't, a Roman Catholic (you must be baptized one by a priest), and EH didn't fit it. So anything with that category is technically as untrue as him being from Chicago. Even more so. S  B Harris 02:01, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
 * You could perhaps put forth a different proposal below to delete all of the catholic cats then. Again, i didn't put him into those cats, I was just taking the existing cats as consensus, and further refining them. If you want to ice the catholic ones, make your case. :) -obi
 * You missed the point of my statement. I don't care about the existence or non-existence of Catholic categories. I'm just saying that EH wasn't actually a member of the Roman Catholic Church, so he doesn't belong in any of them for that reason alone. Yes, he did succeed in fooling a few priests (including after being dead) but then he fooled a priest with his suicide, too, and got a Catholic service and burial. It's almost as though people think that faking your way into a Catholic cemetary guarantees you won't go to Hell or something. Anyway, biography catches up with these things. Nobody will disinter EH, but if he (or his last wife) planned to BS the Catholic god, I rather think they were being silly (I say this as a disinterested agnostic myself; I merely think people should fly the flag their registry would suggest, and vice versa). S  B Harris 04:27, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
 * the extent of his Catholicism is for the biographers, not for us, and it seems there is debate on the matter. In any case, I'm no longer Proposing to add any catholic cats, so if you want to either modify the language about Catholicism in the article or remove the Extant catholic cats feel free to propose below and make the case - if he is indeed just a fake catholic then be should be removed... -obi

I propose to delete the following categories - as they are diffusing parents of a fully diffusing category.
 * (already diffused in a sub-cat by-century)
 * - (already diffused in two sub-cats of this one)
 * (already diffused in several sub-cats of this)
 * (a step too far - not really his hometown)


 * See comments above. S  B Harris 22:52, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

Some of the top-level cats like that he's in today are full up and in need of diffusion, so doing this right for Hemingway is important to set the standard for the rest of these tree.

Note that NikkiMaria has to date provided zero justification for removing some of these cats, in spite of a continued pattern of reverts, besides WP:BRD, which are vague assertions and give little insight to the question at hand - do these cats apply? So I ask her specifically to weigh in and provide reasons besides WP:IDONTLIKEIT for each of the categories above, pro or con.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 07:09, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I suggest maintaining the status quo (the current state of categorization on this article) pending resolution of the broader categorization discussions, particularly the planned RfC. Having the same discussion across multiple individual articles would be a much less efficient approach; it would be preferable to solidify policies and practices first before applying them. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:12, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Um, what would the (non-existent as yet) RFC have to do with bronze star, journalism or fascism categories? --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 16:25, 5 May 2013 (UTC)


 * Category:20th-century American novelists is not under discussion at all, there is no motion to do anything to it. Therefore there is no reason to not move Hemingway to that category.  Hemingway wrote all of his novels completely in the 20th century, there is no reason to not put him in that category.John Pack Lambert (talk) 16:46, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Add Category:American war novelists. 3 of Hemingway's novels are in ;Category:American war novels so it makes sense to categorize him as that as well.John Pack Lambert (talk) 16:57, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I would support all of the proposal to categorize by Obi, except for the Anti-fascist Roman Catholics category. Religion sub-cats are normally limited to those people where the religion is key to their position.  Did Hemingway argue his anti-fascism with Roman Catholic teachings?  If not, he should no more be in that category than he would be in a Roman Catholic writers cat, which is limited to people who wrote material that was Roman Catholic in nature.John Pack Lambert (talk) 17:07, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Just please wait. Is the world coming to an end that this needs to be addressed today, or can it wait for a day or so? Clearly you have very little knowledge about what categories Hemingway should or should not be in. Truthkeeper (talk) 18:14, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Wow. That's not very civil at all. If you have a reasoned argument, please make it - we're here to discuss - but casting aspersion on other editors, like JPL, who is probably one of the most experienced categorizers here, doesn't help anyone. Also, what exactly should we be waiting for? --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 18:20, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * "Did Hemingway argue his anti-fascism with Roman Catholic teachings?" - why can't you all wait for the person/s who know the answer this jawdropping question? Why does it have to be done now? And remember, I'm a woman, and you've obviously decided you won't get a reasoned argument from me. I'm sure SBHarris will do a much better job. Truthkeeper (talk) 19:05, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * It doesn't have to be done now, I'm happy to discuss this as long as you want, but we OTOH shouldn't spend 2 months debating Hemingway's categories - we should just decide and move on. Secondly, your last sentence is uncalled for and untrue and I've never said any such thing. Please stop putting words in my mouth. Regards, --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 19:40, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * A few days shouldn't have made a difference. I'm about to formulate a reasoned response. It will take a bit of time and be long, so please bear with me. Truthkeeper (talk) 19:44, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * No problem at all. --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 20:08, 7 May 2013 (UTC)


 * Response:
 * - yes, fine
 * - agree with SBHarris
 * so, add? -obi


 * - yep, should be added
 * - sounds odd, but don't care. I suppose we call him a big game hunter, a deep sea fisher, a trout fisher(man), etc. I'd call him a sportsman, but probably that's too broad.
 * - agree with SBHarris and would like to see consensus that we're dropping American novelist. So far I've seen a number of people edit up to American novelist and a number edit to diffuse. I've yet to be swayed by a compelling reason to diffuse and remain unconvinced.
 * How about a compromise: we agree to add this one for now, and keep, pending what happens in the rest of the tree. -obi


 * - unnecessary. For many socio-economic reasons it's the default for writers/novelists.
 * While I see your point, and in a sense, agree with it, here is the problem. If this category is kept (based on votes, it's likely to) and someone famous like Hemingway isn't in it, that is another front page op-ed. Seriously. If the category is kept, he has to be in it - along with every single other male novelist - it's what we signed up for if the category is kept. Otherwise, we expose ourselves to critiques of gender segregation again, esp if we start making special exceptions for our favorite authors (e.g. "Wikipedia has a men novelists category, but there are only 3 people in it, so clearly the editors don't care" - or whatever) -obi
 * This is where we disagree. Who cares? I mean really? He's obviously a guy. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:55, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * On April 20th, I would have agreed - who the f*** cares? But we're May 7, the world has changed, categorization at wikipedia has become politicized, esp categorization of novelist bios, and the very issue of the existence (or non-existence) of this specific male cat to mirror the female was a hot topic. Now that it exists, and *if* it remains, then we don't have a choice IMO - otherwise we're guaranteed to have egg on our face when NY Times columnists find out that old Papa got a free pass and wasn't ghettoized with the boys in the "men novelists" cat. How would it look if all sorts of lesser-novelists were there, but Papa wasn't? -Obi


 * - agree with SBHarris. I'm not sure this is accurate. SBHarris is correct about EH's catholicism. That's one we could eliminate but it always creeps back. He wasn't really Roman Catholic - pretended to be in order to marry wife #2.
 * Again, I was just going by the cats already here. If you guys think we should eliminate all of the roman catholic cats, then propose it (or keep converts but remove the straight catholics one) I also think though that JPL has a point - in that "religion X" people are usually those whereby the religion is closely identified with the work. It's not just you do some work, and you happen to be some religion (this is how gender/ethnic/sexuality cats work, on the other hand) - so I now agree this one should be dropped. - obi


 * - again, agree with SBHarris.
 * so, add? -obi
 * I cannot see a compelling reason to add to the many categories already there but not married to this either way. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:55, 7 May 2013 (UTC)


 * - until I see a strong consensus form that we should diffuse this category (I've not seen it yet and the Cfd for American women novelists suggested keeping it)
 * - which categories diffuse this? Not saying it shouldn't be diffused, but I'm doing three things at once and don't have the actual article open
 * and - I'm sure others could be added as well -obi
 * This is where I begin to have problems. A lot can be added: he was a sports journalist, a journalist who covered various various minor wars; a WWII journalist; and so on. At some point we have category overload. Best to just say journalist and let it be. If we just say journalist, then let's leave him also as a novelist and let it be. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:55, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * yes, but that's what diffusion means - being more specific. is a good diffuser, as it doesn't preclude any of those things he did - so we don't need  as a result (that should be diffused next, btw.) -obi


 * - fine with me, but project Chicago likes having this, so guaranteed to be added back
 * - disagree with diffusion to this extent for the following reasons: it's difficult to place EH in a genre category, but I suppose if any would work, it'd be this. However, by adding this category it suggests that all his novels are in that category which is untrue. In my view it's best to define the actual novels on the novel pages; i.e. define For Whom the Bells Toll as a war novel there (although it's much more than simply a war novel)
 * In this new setup, if it ends up being accepted, every single novelist will be in, and they will also be in any relevant genre categories. So this one doesn't really diffuse, it's more a facet that he fits into, but he could fit into others as well - but it shouldn't be seen as being exclusive. -obi
 * Nope, gotta diffuse them all or none. If we define as a war novelist some 15 year old kid will write that in a paper and the teacher will give him an F (I'm not totally overstating here). He wrote about war, about bullfighting, about the Lost Generation, about Africa, about love, about hunting/fishing and so on. Shoehorning into war novelist would be wrong; if we add all the genres, and some we'll be making up, then there's more category overload plus remnants that belong nowhere. Best to call him a novelist. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:55, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * This gets to the heart of the genre discussion in general - at what point can you put a novelist in a genre - even if they did other things? For example, another editor was recently defending the sancitity of Philip K. Dick, saying "he was so much more than a sci-fi writer" - which I fully agree with - so it's really a philosophical question about what these genre categories *mean* when applied to a novelist - and to what extent do they extend (my view) or constrain (your view)... -obi

I have been thinking about this and have more to add, but here's part one. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:16, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * - I think I noticed that there too. If so, it should be removed - probably not true and certainly not sourced in the article.
 * More coming in regards to genres, 20th century writers, remnants, and the fact that this is a biography of a very complicated man. Basically the only issue is whether to keep American novelist or to diffuse to 20th century. Either way there will be remnants that can't diffuse more and that's what's causing the problem. The only solution, which libraries and bookstores know, is to keep the large novelist category. Sorry, out of time. More in a day or so. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:55, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Ok - but the is exactly that - the large, undifferentiated novelists category. That is exactly it's purpose. It's just a bit smaller, grouped by time. But otherwise the scope is exactly the same. On genres in general, plz respond on the novelists project talk page, we started a discussion there as you suggested and your inputs would be welcome.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 21:15, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, I really can't respond to all these today - I need to be out for another day or so. Quick responses: don't let the media lead us re the gender categories; the genre issue is the heart of the "novelist" category and it's much more important than gender. I'll write up information in regards to that when I'm back. Truthkeeper (talk) 21:19, 7 May 2013 (UTC)


 * If we move people to Category:20th-century American novelists and sibling cats we actually avoid the genre debate entirely. We can put Hemingway in the war novelists cateogry, since he wrote three novels we classify as war novels, and not have to decide if that excludes him for the general parent or not.  I think people have misinterpreted previous CfDs.  No one has ever said that Category:American novelists should not ever be diffused, they only argued against diffusing by gender.  No one has ever put up an argument against Category:20th-century American novelists.John Pack Lambert (talk) 01:21, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Which three novels? Truthkeeper (talk) 09:49, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
 * farewell to arms, for whom the bell tolls, across the river and into the trees. At least the first two are regularly mentioned in lists of best/most famous "war" novels - and are referenced atWar_novel. --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 11:41, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

Response to proposal
Let's for a moment consider abiding strictly to WP's pillars:


 * Consensus - this CfD shows clear consensus (and I believe was closed correctly) to merge and keep the American women novelists category. In my view we might need an RfC, but as I read it, those !voting to merge were asking to put the American women novelists into the parent category of American novelist. If that's the case and all the men are diffused out of American novelists, either by gender/genre or both, then we end up with a parent cat that contains only women which is suboptimal. Thus - in my view, all American novelists must be left in the parent category (huge as it may be), diffused by gender if that's the consensus and leave it at that. Nowhere do I see consensus to diffuse by century or by genre; furthermore genre is best left to the specific page about a given work rather than a biography page. But, if there's doubt, as obviously there is, then the way to solve the confusion is with a well-worded and focused RfC.
 * Verifiability - To be certain, I looked at Charles Oliver's Ernest Hemingway:The Essential Reference, a credible and good overview of all his work, and Across the River and Into the Trees is not, according to him, about war. It is about death, but war is secondary in that the protagonist was in the military, but the overarching theme is how one faces death - in general. So, in my view, we can't simply place EH into the war novelist category based on two novels: A Farewell to Arms and For Whom the Bells Toll. What to do about The Torrents of Spring, set in Michigan; The Sun Also Rises, considered his best by many critics and set in post-WWI Paris, Pamplona, and Madrid; To Have and Have Not, set in Florida and Key West; his Pulitzer Prize-winning and Nobel prize-winning The Old Man and the Sea set in Cuba; and the posthumous novels set variously in Africa and the Caribbean? We could call him a war novelist but we'd have to shoehorn all the other novels into categories that too becomes difficult and frankly uses up too much real-estate in the categories. Best to call him a novelist and be done with it. This is an issue that too applies to Faulkener, Steinbeck, Sinclair, etc., etc., in American lit. Because it's impossible to shoehorn some novelists into genres, remnants will be left in the parent cat, whether American novelist or 20th century American novelist, and that too is suboptimal.
 * No original research - in regards to the issue of the Roman Catholic category, on giving this some thought, I've decided it really needs to stay. This suggestion to modify the text based on the cat isn't how we should be categorizing; instead we should be categorizing based on sourced information from the text. Though in essence EH's catholicism may or may not have been a sham, the biographers toe a line because no one really knows what happened before he married Pauline Pfeiffer (biographers have speculated, but basically EH said he converted and so that's really that). So we have to go with what he have and that's Roman Catholic. I really don't see the logic of concatenating Roman Catholic with anti-fascist - in my mind they are two distinct (defining) characteristics. I believe we need to follow the same rule in regards to all the categories: in other words labeling something he wasn't (i.e, a writer of a specific genre) because it seems to work can be seen as original research. Truthkeeper (talk) 15:07, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I've already struck the rec for anti-fascist+roman catholic - we can drop that. The category is up for deletion at CFD now anyway.
 * I don't think you need to bring forth a lot more proof that Hemingway didn't only write war novels - on that account I don't need convincing, nor probably does anyone else.
 * I never suggested modifying the text based on the categories. Please don't misquote me.
 * There's a problem with your conclusion in #1. Yes, consensus was to merge, but consensus was mum on whether further non-gendered diffusion could be performed *after* they were all bubbled up. Consensus certainly wasn't to overturn WP:Categorization. Secondly, I agree it would be absurd to only have women there, so then we need to bring all the men up - which now means, everyone - every single bio, all 6700 of them - including everyone in the genres (do you understand logically why this must be the case?). That to me is also an absurd result. But, ok, suppose you do that. Now you have 6700 bios in, and then some of them are also women, also african american, also war novelists. Do you now see that putting Ernest as a war novelist is not eclipsing other facets of his work, but simply adding an additional characteristic? We could also put him in other genres. And the same rule applies to every single novelist. No matter what the result, I think either all novelists should be in , or all novelists should be in the by-century sub-cats thereof, as well as any genres. I don't think there should be a special club of that some people can be in but not others just because they always wrote in a genre. This unadulterated novelist tag has too much discursive power right now - the non-OR thing to do is to stick everyone in it, or no-one.
 * Finally, as to the specifics of Hemingway as a war novelist, it seems someone wrote a whole thesis on the matter: "Hemingway as a War Novelist. William S. Ellis, Harvard University, 1946".
 * FWIW, in any case I think we agree on one thing, that we should *not* diffuse by genre anymore. But I *do* think we can easily diffuse by century - literature and writers are often grouped this way, and you can diffuse unambiguously on that criteria.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 15:21, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
 * We need to follow consensus. The question seems to be whether or not it's feasible to have a large category and it won't be answered here. That's why I think we need an RfC - will post in regards to that later. In the meantime, I'd like to suggest freezing the categorization here. Truthkeeper (talk) 15:31, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

FWIW - I've decided to unwatch here. Someone else can curate for a while. Truthkeeper (talk) 21:32, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * What is clear is that the special leaving of Hemingway and a few others in Category:American novelists while most others are being dispersed to by century categories makes no sense at all. There is no justification for this special leaving of a few.John Pack Lambert (talk) 01:50, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Don't worry about it. Either there will be an RFC soon, and the community will decide, or there won't, and status quo of diffusing cats will continue. Either way, he will eventually be moved to the proper cat. Not worth worrying about! --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 01:55, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Cats to add
Ok, taking from the above discussion, it seems the following cats have rough consensus to add: (sources for war novelist:)
 * Category:Writers from Illinois
 * Category:Journalists from Illinois
 * Category:Recipients of the Bronze Star Medal
 * Category:American fishers
 * Category:American men novelists
 * Category:American anti-fascists
 * Category:American war novelists
 * "Back in harness as a journalist, "Papa" hemingway, America's premier war novelist, had ridden to the Norman shore in a LST on June 6."
 * "In time American soldiers and their novelist-creators will walk away from the experience, like Tim O'Brien's Cacciato. And notice where Cacciato's pursuers walk: to the same safe haven American's prototypical war novelist, Ernest Hemingy, found just up the hill from Barthe's eventual professorship at the College de France"
 * "There is a laconic stoicism and youthful integrity that make him a figure out of Hemingway - the writer who, along with Stephen Crane, lies across the path of every modern war novelist."

Delete:
 * Category:Anti-fascists - (already diffused in a national sub-cat of this one)
 * Category:American journalists (already diffused in several sub-cats of this)
 * Category:Writers from Chicago, Illinois (not really from chicago)

Please let me know your thoughts. For now we will keep, pending RFC results (or if no RFC happens, we will follow the rest of the tree) --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 02:05, 16 May 2013 (UTC)


 * The previous posts seem fairly clear, but perhaps not. So again:
 * Category:Writers from Illinois - fine to add, but to me Category:Writers from Chicago, Illinois is more clear given the wikiproject banner at the top of this page and that generally readers from outside the US don't know that Chicago is in Illinois. Also, he did live in Chicago, was a writer there, and met his first wife there, so seems relevant to me.
 * I personally dont' care either way - it was SBHarris who wanted to kill the Chicago category.
 * Category:Journalists from Illinois - wouldn't it be better to dump the writer category altogether? By definition a journalist, essayist, novelist, short story writer, etc,. is a writer.
 * True - but the way the tree is set up, it still makes sense (we don't have novelists from Illinois for example, so ppl end up in more generic cats)
 * Category:Recipients of the Bronze Star Medal - no argument
 * Category:American fishers - he did fish, we even have pictures in the article of him fishing, his nobel prize winning book was about a fisherman, so seems fairly straightforward. Still, I have to ask - is this more relevant to EH's life that being a novelist?
 * It's not about whether it is more relevant, it's whether it is defining. I think being a hunter and a fisherman is defining for him - not more important (less, obviously), but still defining. If we don't put in fishers, we should remove hunters as well.
 * Category:American men novelists - as I mentioned above, I don't think this category is relevant. Would prefer to see it American novelists.
 * For now I'm not proposing removing American novelists, so he'd be in both.
 * Category:American anti-fascists - in the sense of the Spanish Civil war, yes.
 * Category:American war novelists - thanks for the sources, but it's not disputed that two of his novels were war novels. How would you characterize the other novels so that he is labeled only (just) a war novelist?
 * I don't think we have genres for his other novels. So he's labelled many things - a novelist, a writer, a journalist, *and* a war novelist. I just think, given those quotes and others, if he's not in the category, we're doing something wrong.
 * Category:American journalists - would like to keep, because if we're to get picky, he in fact was an American journalist working in Canada, France, Spain, Africa, etc. Seems relevant.
 * Ok.
 * Category:Writers from Chicago, Illinois (not really from chicago) - yes, from Chicago. Perhaps check with the wikiproject Chicago folks? Seems relevant.
 * These responses after giving it some thought. Truthkeeper (talk) 20:54, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'll make those changes. thanks. --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 21:12, 16 May 2013 (UTC)


 * I don't think we have genres for his other novels. So he's labelled many things - a novelist, a writer, a journalist, *and* a war novelist. I just think, given those quotes and others, if he's not in the category, we're doing something wrong.  >> this is the big problem here and makes me want to blank my page again. You are not listening and creating categories for the sake of categories, regardless of countless of thousands of literary sources. Given these answers I really just have to throw up my hands, and again tell you that you've won. I'll unwatch again. And probably leave again. And then you can be a winner. Truthkeeper (talk) 21:16, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Wait, what? (1) I didn't create that category and (2) I gave you 3 sources above that call him not only a war novelist, but the prototypical, premier American war novelist. His presence as a war novelist does not mean he's also not in other novelist cats - like and  - it doesn't take anything away, it only adds. I'm trying hard to reach consensus here but I don't understand your logic - it's not that I don't listen, I literally don't understand. Why do you think him being a war novelist means he's ONLY a war novelist (the fact that he's a hunter doesn't mean he's ONLY a hunter, the fact that he is anti-fascist doesn't mean he's ONLY anti-fascist - these are all facets - this is completely standard, look at any other bio...--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 21:25, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * This is my last response here in regards to this because we're talking past each other and what I'm saying isn't being heard. Some writers write novels that cannot be put into a genre. This is true of many American novelists - they write novels - plain and simple. So, to use an analogy - it's like inviting a bunch of kids to a birthday party and then saying, "well, you can't be here because I can't give you a label, but hey we can make up a label for you." That EH wrote 2 war novels is not disputed, nor have I disputed it. That he wrote much more is the heart of the problem, the reason I'm digging my heels in here and elsewhere, the reason I believe we need an RfC, and the reason I believe the press characterized the categorization on WP as they did. But, because we're talking past each other, I don't see any reason to continue this. Either it will be sorted or it won't. Truthkeeper (talk) 21:55, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * TK, please don't go away. I am listening, and guess what, I AGREE WITH YOU 100%. "Some writers write novels that cannot be put into a genre." I completely, 100% agree. The question is, what is a reasonable way to use these genre categories, given that? You seem to be proposing that unless all of an author's works were in a genre, they can't be in the genre category. I am suggesting that if RELIABLE SOURCES call him a war novelist, even if other RELIABLE SOURCES call him a novelist, the answer is to do both - call him a novelist, and a war novelist. I still completely fail to see why this is so problematic for you. Take another example: Philip K. Dick. He was VERY well known as a science fiction novelist, but he did a lot else besides. So, does that mean we now CANT place him in - it makes zero sense to me - but that's effectively what you're saying about EH. He wrote two war novels, he's been called our "premier" war novelist, but because he wrote OTHER stuff, he can't possibly be categorized as a war novelist? It's not exclusive - it doesn't limit who he is, it just adds an additional facet - like every other category on every other bio (in the language of categories, we would say the genre categories are, themselves, non-diffusing).--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 22:07, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * We're still talking past each other. I haven't ever disputed that he's a war novelist, but that's not all he is. I've now said this I don't know how many times, and the problem is, it doesn't only pertain to EH but to many novelists. So, let's put the genre issue to bed: a biography page is not the place for it; the place for that label is the specific article about the specific book where we have more flexibility. To use your own terminology: to label someone for lack of any other label is ghettoizing in a literary sense and that's what's happening to the American novelists. The solution in my view is simple, bold, and requires IAR: put all the novelists together! Don't try to label them! To use the birthday party analogy again - invite all the kids to the party! Don't invite all the kids, but then say the girls have to go to that room, the boys over there, the war novelist boys in that little room. That's what created this mess and the only way out is it think outside the box. This too, is in reply to JPL's post below - categorizing by century is a solution looking for a problem. Anyway, that's how I see it, how I believe the media views it, and frankly how I know from experience how our readers treat categories. So what if we have a big party? Will the world come to an end? Truthkeeper (talk) 22:40, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * but what if we had a birthday party, and all the 12 year olds could be in the 12 year-old room, and the boys or girls room, and the science fiction or western room - the analogy fails because novelists can be in multiple cats. But I think you're saying "forget the genre cats all-together" - well, that is also possible, but the venue is not article by article disputing membership, it's nominating every genre cat for deletion. Feel free to do so, and then see if the community agrees - I can't control that. Until then, given that we have these cats, we should fill them up. My philosophy on cats is, fill them up, or delete - there shouldn't be in-between cats, where some war novelists are there but our most famous one isn't. You could try a test nomination of the war novelists category, and see how it goes...Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk)
 * Personally, I think some of the 12 year olds might want to hang with the 13 year olds and so on. Anyway, I can't do this. I've chosen to make a stand here because it's the most active on my watch and gets a lot of page views (which quite frankly is important). I'm not a categorizer or a nom to delete person. What I do here on WP is write and generally talking and trying to explain what to me makes perfect sense I find exhausting. So while y'all are moving the categories, I'll rewrite the articles as they pop up on my watch. Truthkeeper (talk) 23:00, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * TK, you make your own decisions about how you engage with wikipedia. However, if you tell me that you are willing to be banned to prevent a certain category from being added to a certain bio, and then you also state that you want to IAR and blow up all of the genre categories because you think they are not workable... but THEN, are NOT willing to do the necessary to get those cats deleted, then I guess I don't know what to say to you, except, don't complain if the cats aren't the way you like them! I've created dozens of cats, maybe more, and I've also deleted dozens of cats at CFD or maybe more. I've had drag out terrible battles over cats that I hated, and yet, they were kept - and I've had cats deleted that people loved. Consensus can be brutal. But if you have a complaint about a cat, CFD is where it's at! Heck, if you write the justification, I will even bring to CFD on your behalf (but I will !vote to keep) - if you agree to add him to the cat and keep him there if the cat survives...--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 02:08, 17 May 2013 (UTC)


 * This is the beauty of putting everyone in by century cats, no one will be in the generic novelists cat, and so putting them in specific sub-cats by genre will in no way say the did not write in other generes, just affirm that they wrote that genere. We have people in romatic, horror, fantasy and mystery generes all at once, and that may not even be the record.John Pack Lambert (talk) 22:13, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I added all of the above noted cats, with the exception of - we will discuss this further. FWIW, I started a discussion, per TK's recommendation, about novelist genre-cats in general here - so please join that discussion if interested. I also added Hemingway to the  cat per multiple sources - this is an under-used category for the moment, and it has no national-level tree, but it's the best we have for now - that may be refined if we have a broader revision of the  tree.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 03:13, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

THE CROOK FACTORY
There should be some mention of Dan Simmon's "THE CROOK FACTORY" in this article. This book has it's own Wikipedia entry and there should be a link between the two. Simmons claims Hemminway ran an espionage operation he called "The Crook Factory" from Cuba during 1942-1943, with the knowledge and approval of US and other spy agencies. He says Hemmingway was being followed by the FBI, so as others have mentioned, this particular claim by the writer was not paranoia. He also speculates Hemmingway may have committed suicide due to forced electroshock treatments which burned out his creative abilities and left him unable to write. Simmons, Dan.(1999)(2013). "THE CROOK FACTORY." New York, Boston, London. Little Brown and Company. ISBN 978-0-316-21345-5 Renobanker1 (talk) 18:28, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

FBI
Inside this article is the fact that Hemingway thought he was being followed by the FBI, later facts show that he was in the mental hospital. This leads one to assume that Hemingway was delusional about the FBI following him, when in reality the FBI have provided his file that he was indeed being tracked by them, and that they had also tapped his phones. This is unintentional or deliberately misleading for the reader without proper context. Add the truth in context with Hemingway's beliefs about the FBI with the fact that FBI was following him. Instead of leaving it in obscurity in the note section. Anything else makes this article look incomplete, misleading, and unreliable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.85.207.20 (talk) 23:39, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
 * EH had an FBI file since working closely with the FBI during WWII in Cuba (why the FBI was in Cuba I do not know-- I can only presume the FBI handled some foreign intelligence close to home in the days before the CIA, and while the OSS was occupied in Europe). Anyway, the FBI certainly was running US Cuban intelligence, not the OSS, and EH was a US resource, not a target. Much later the FBI file on EH shows they knew EH was in the Mayo Clinic in 1961, but there's nothing to show that this isn't because asked his doctors to CALL the FBI and TELL them where he was. He was paranoid, thought he might be prosecuted for some tax error, and was afraid the FBI would think he was giving them the slip. What specifically in the FBI file shows the FBIs were following EH, other than this lone fact, which has several possible explanations? And what is the evidence they were tapping his phones? What is your source? S  B Harris 04:06, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm in agreement that this issue should be revisited. (Time-permitting, I'll see what I can unearth. Most, if not all, of the references pertaining to the FBI, as well as his alleged "paranoia" are quite dated. For reference, here's a link to a New York Times Op-Ed by A.E. Hotchner (http://www.nytimes.com/2011/07/02/opinion/02hotchner.html?pagewanted=1&src=recg&_r=0), in which he says: "Decades later, in response to a Freedom of Information petition, the F.B.I. released its Hemingway file. It revealed that beginning in the 1940s J. Edgar Hoover had placed Ernest under surveillance because he was suspicious of Ernest’s activities in Cuba. Over the following years, agents filed reports on him and tapped his phones. The surveillance continued all through his confinement at St. Mary’s Hospital. It is likely that the phone outside his room was tapped after all." (emphasis mine) I agree with the above party who wrote that we must accurately reflect the truth of the FBI's influence.  To do otherwise, as this person noted, is to "make this article look incomplete, misleading, and unreliable.   Elizabeth Blandra (talk) 21:36, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Jeffrey Meyers got the FBI files in the 80's under the FOIA, for his bio. I have Meyers' bio of EH and it doesn't say anything about the FBI either tailing EH at the Mayo, or tapping his phones there. They knew he was there, indeed, but that could (and I believe was) because EH was so paranoid that he asked his doctors to phone the FBI and TELL THEM he was at the Mayo (under an assumed name) so that they wouldn't think he was trying to do something criminal. They FBI reported in a rather hangdog way to EH's doctor that they "had no objection" to his getting medical treatment under an assumed name. That's sad, but does NOTHING to establish Hotchner's wild idea that the FBI was either tapping or following EH at the end of his days in 1960-61. Clearly, EH was in contact with the FBI at that time. They didn't need to tail him. Prove me wrong. Meyers would have made this case from the files if it could be made, but it can't. S  B Harris 03:58, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

Hemingway, wanna-be spy?
Recent book: how should we treat in the article? --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 05:26, 18 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Already mentioned here in archives. It went in but seems to have been taken out. Maybe at FAC, can't remember, will search, but almost certainly because the Guardian article is a review and the book needs to be found, read, synthesized, and then decide how much weight to give it. Also, just to say, if this comment is in response the new article I created last night - "The Revolutionist" - that was a random choice to fill in a red link for DYK because it's a good example of flash fiction. Had zero to do with making a point. Until yesterday I'd never read the story. Victoria (talk) 12:56, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
 * has nothing to do with article u created... Ok but it seems this is worth adding back, I will see if I can find the book. Also just noticed date on my link. Strange, as I got to it through guardian web, why would they promote a link that is now 4 years old? Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 13:00, 18 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Haven't a clue. Try to find in history first why it was removed, there may have been a good reason. Much (understatement!) has been written about Hemingway, many theories, many conspiracies, and in a summary article not all can be added so they have to judged on individual merit. Victoria (talk) 13:07, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

I see this was added,, and quick to be reverted, , as I was trying to tease apart which material belonged to which citations. Personally I'm not crazy having the Wikipedia article about Hemingway that gets quite a lot of views per day declare with little qualification that he was a KGB agent without anyone examining the source. I'll not revert, but would like to see consensus on this. It will be in many many mirror sites within a short period. Victoria (talk) 00:35, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

It's pretty clear to me that, IMO, if it's mentioned in sources like the Guardian and whatnot that we've gotta say at least something about it. Inanygivenhole (talk) 19:07, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I haven't read this carefully, but it seemed to suggest he was a wanna-be, not an actual, spy. I agree with VE, we need to read the actual book and understand the context - I would support reverting for now, until someone secures the books and provides better quotes and references than a short guardian article. Did anyone else cover this (e.g. other media sources, scholars, etc)? --Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 21:29, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

Based on what we can take from the indirect source, The Guardian, the book's claim is taken from notes Alexander Vassiliev took while he had access to KGB files. Vassiliev has not, at least as far as we can tell, produced the documents, only that he claims to have seen them. I think perhaps there should be an in-text attribution to Vassiliev until more information comes to light. To simply attribute it to a book says nothing of the merit of the statement (which I would current rank as "dubious"). Scoundr3l (talk) 21:48, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, I agree with this. I'll wait for another day or so and then probably take it out. Thanks for posting. Victoria (talk) 01:21, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

Add to infobox?
I'm not sure why this entry is protected (aside for the extended conversation above) but I just wanted to add the ages of his children to the infobox (which, if known, usually appears). Here's the info, according to his family tree that's linked to:


 * John "Jack" (1923-2000)
 * Patrick (1928- )
 * Gregory (1931-2001)

I hope someone with editing privileges that can add this in. Thanks. 69.125.134.86 (talk) 16:20, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

Edit request
Could there be some mention of Hemingway shortly before his death saying that the electroshock treatments had destroyed his memory and therefore he was unable to write anymore? I've read this anecdote in several places but can't seem to find a quotable source. E. Francesca Allan (talk) 16:43, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

This seems relevant: http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Why_did_Ernest_Hemingway_commit_suicide E. Francesca Allan (talk) 16:45, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi, I think it's in the article in the section about his death. These sentences seem very much like the source you linked and in fact could be we call a mirror of wikipedia:

Anyway, I'm slowly sprucing up a bit, and if it looks more needs to be added, I will. Thanks. Victoria (talk) 23:56, 19 July 2013 (UTC)

American atheist
According to biographer Paul Johnson in his book 'Intellectuals' "He not only did not believe in God but regarded organized religion as a menace to human happiness and that when he told his mother he still prayed every night that it was a lie to keep the peace with her. His mother had sent him a letter telling that he had bankrupted his account with her and among the reasons was his neglect his duties to his God and Savior.

Unless someone objects to Paul Johnson's ability to be a reliable source on Hemingway, this appears to be enough evidence to place Hemingway in the American atheists category and to have a small passage on his view about religion. 97.85.168.22 (talk) 09:13, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I looked at the source, and I have the biographies Johnson used. I thought at some point there was something in here about EH rejecting his parent's religion, but can't find it. The article has degenerated quite a bit and needs some work. I'll try to swing through and see if I can work that in. As far as categories, I don't really know how those work. Victoria (talk) 12:41, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
 * If you search this talk page in the closed discussion you'll find a removal of for lack of sourcing.  It's a simple matter to add that to the very bottom of the article maybe after Converts to Catholicism?  Alatari (talk) 10:08, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi sorry for the confusion! I've changed my username from Truthkeeper88 so that was me taking part in the conversation above. I don't really have a problem with atheist category - I think it's been in the article for a while, though I'd have to check history, and not convinced it needs sourcing. But I'm not opposed to adding a sentence or so or a note; just trying to think where. I believe at one point there was something about it and as I'm tidying have been searching through history, so I might be able to pull something our from an old version. Will take a few days though, if that's okay. Victoria (talk) 14:45, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Not a problem. In the source I linked above Paul Johnson touches on the disdain he had for his mother and how important that was to themes in his books.  It is mentioned briefly in the personal section and then the styles sections discuss his treatment of women but the connection that Paul Johnson makes between his relationship with his mother and how he portrays women isn't made.  It's a separate issue and it's just the one biographer but if other's have made the connection couldn't we under styles?  Alatari (talk) 20:22, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Maybe it could go under themes but it's a stretch. I think probably stream in something in the part about his mother, and then maybe something again in the part where he supposedly converted to Catholicism and maybe a note elsewhere. Johnson's piece has a bibliography and I have many of those books, have read all of them, so am interested in looking again to see how and where they deal with it - in particular Meyers. I'll look too at the criticism to see whether it's dealt with there and see what we can put into themes. I don't think it needs a huge amount. I might give it a stab later tonight or tomorrow morning. And yes, I agree that Johnson's connection is important so there's probably no reason not to use him either. Will pull out all the sources and put on my thinking cap. Victoria (talk) 20:57, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I read every Hemingway biography since Carlos Baker's 1967 tome up through those published through the year 2000, and where did it say he was atheist? The quote, "All thinking me are atheists" comes from a BOOK OF FICTION and is in the mouth of a character that is NOT modeled after Hemingway. Johnson is NOT a Hemingway biographer. This ignores comments he made to Fitzgerald about Catholicism, the fact that he gave his Nobel Peace medal to the cathedral in Havana, and the Christian imagery in his prose. Just because someone is not religious doesn't make them an atheist. I've never even heard Hemingway considered an agnostic until I came across this.Shemp Howard, Jr. (talk) 03:13, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * "Supposedly converted to Catholicism"??? This is absurd.Shemp Howard, Jr. (talk) 03:15, 25 September 2013 (UTC)

Hemingway was Russian spy
WhisperToMe (talk) 08:44, 14 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Dugdale, John. "Hemingway revealed as failed KGB spy." The Guardian. Thursday July 9, 2009.

Semi-protected edit request on 10 December 2013
The Ernest Hemingway article is full of violations of the punctuation rule that periods and commas should be placed inside final quotation marks and not outside them. In this article the comma and the period are repeatedly placed outside final quotation marks. While logically it may seem that a quote, including its final quotation marks, should lie wholly before a period, which ends the entire sentence, or before a comma, which ends the entire clause or phrase, this is not correct.

Bfmcoffee (talk) 17:14, 10 December 2013 (UTC) Bfmcoffee (talk) 17:16, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi Bfmcoffee, our Manual of Style does not follow that rule - see MOS:LQ. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:22, 10 December 2013 (UTC)

Death of Mary Welsh Hemmingway
The infobox currently says that Mary Welsh Hemmingway died in 1961, as opposed to her actual article which states that she died in 1986. Hopefully someone with editing privileges can fix this discrepancy. Sunshineplur (talk) 14:27, 15 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Those are the years she was Hemingway's wife; in 1961 she became his widow. Pinethicket (talk) 14:43, 15 January 2014 (UTC)

Missing Work
There is no mention of his memoir _A Moveable Feast_ published posthumously in 1964. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.6.83.101 (talk) 06:17, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, the works section is for selected works instead of complete list. It's written about in the article, it's in the Ernest Hemingway bibliography, it's on the navigation template at the bottom of the page - all those will link directly to A Moveable Feast. Victoria (tk) 12:45, 2 March 2014 (UTC)

Sexting?
I just found out that Ernesto, ol' boy, sent ultra hot, sexy, and somewhat obserd letters to a popular actress at the time. more deets, references, etc to follow. User: ME  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.92.132.207 (talk) 17:02, 18 March 2014 (UTC)