Talk:Ernest Lagarde

Copyediting
The article needs significant copyediting, which I intend to help with. Nolabob (talk) 13:22, 6 November 2023 (UTC)


 * I have conducted a significant amount of copyediting on this article, and a few other fixes. There may be more copyediting to be done. I recommend the following to future editors of this article: There is a considerable amount of information in the lead section of this article that probably should be later in the article rather than lead section. The article contains several digressions that perhaps should be removed from the article. Also, the references should be verified. Nolabob (talk) 13:36, 10 November 2023 (UTC)