Talk:Ernie Toshack with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948/GA1

GA Review
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 * Love the hair. Will review soon Ling.Nut (talk&mdash;WP:3IAR) 01:23, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

Overall the article's pretty good, here's what I'd like to see fixed though:
 * "They were eventually out for 189, 363 runs in arrears and were forced to follow on." Either link "runs in arrears" or explain it, since i don't get that term at all.
 * "On the second day, the Australian lower order counter-attacked and Toshack joined Johnston with the score at 9/320 and they put on 30 more runs before Johnston was stumped." Any possibility of the redlinked "stumped" turning blue? If not no big deal though it'd be nice.
 * The Third Test article feels kinda short. If he was barely playing in the test then that would explain it, though if that's the case it should be a little clearer.

I'll put the article on hold, though there's very little to fix. Wizardman 17:16, 9 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The Third Test was heavily interrupted by rain so Toshack basically only played half the bgame. I've fixed the others.  YellowMonkey  ( click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model! ) 23:57, 9 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Looks good. Wizardman  01:29, 10 March 2009 (UTC)