Talk:Ersatz Zenta-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:02, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

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 * No DABs.
 * Are there any articles on the guns that were planned to be used? If not, create redlinks.
 * I'm not sure what the correct title for the 9cm or 19cm guns would be, but there is one for the Škoda 15 cm K10 gun. Parsecboy (talk) 14:14, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Škoda 19 cm L/42 gun and Škoda 9 cm K12/16 gun would work without butchering the full and formal designations for the guns too badly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:23, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Works for me. Parsecboy (talk) 15:40, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Were the 12 cm guns all in single mounts?
 * Clarified. Parsecboy (talk) 14:14, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Link parliament, displacement, full load
 * Explain or link frames
 * would extend from 2 m (6 ft 7 in) above the waterline and 1.2 m (3 ft 11 in) below the line Suggest "waterline to 1.2 m (3 ft 11 in) below."
 * Hyphenate "four shaft" arrangement.
 * Is there a link for landing gun?
 * No; it is a semi-common term among wikipedia pages for guns, but has no page of itself that I can find, nor a wiktionary page; I have redlinked it for now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  13:58, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

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 * torpedo tubes in deck-mounted launchers located amidships Awkward
 * Still awkward, IMO.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:28, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Watch your rounding in the conversion templates.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:02, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Especially 45 cm (18 in)
 * Ah, yeah, I missed this one. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 15:40, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * This article had an atypically large number of conversions and I had to hunt (again!) for the one that I meant so we could put this puppy to bed. The secret for metric to inches is to see which of the latter have only two digits without a decimal point. Not infallible, but a pretty good rule of thumb. Fix the sentence about the torpedo tubes and we'll be done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:49, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Did you mean 533mm (21.0in) -> 533mm (21in)? If so, that's fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 16:17, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Nah, that's just a quirk of mine and not something that I enforce on anybody else. 45 cm ≠ 18 in is more what I worry about for other peoples' articles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:29, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Oh, yeah, that's already fixed ;) Parsecboy (talk) 16:38, 27 October 2017 (UTC)