Talk:Erwiana Sulistyaningsih

Article Name
I'm not sure that the article should be renamed or not. I defintely think that the incident is notable as evidenced by international coverage on 4 continents but I am unsure if it's the event that is notable or the person. I'm open to suggestions and WP:BOLD name changes! Hell In A Bucket (talk) 04:51, 23 January 2014 (UTC)

A few ideas
I might change the section titles to "early life," "Employment as a domestic servant," and "Aftermath", which are a bit broader. It might be useful to know if Time's list of 100 is in some way regular, and, if it is, to add some limitations, like maybe "that year's list of..." I would change the first sentence of the "Abuse" section, or maybe drop it altogether. as it seems to be covered in the end of that section and it does seem to "prejudge" the content of that same section. The last citation of the TIME's 100 section should probably be moved to the end of the sentence, to source what she said as well, if that is in fact where the material is sourced. Just a few early ideas, anyway. John Carter (talk) 19:50, 28 February 2015 (UTC)