Talk:Erwin Arnada/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gilderien (talk · contribs) 22:29, 9 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks for offering to review. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:44, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Initial thoughts

 * Not a quick-fail
 * "Arnada applied to be a photographer for the daily newspaper Kompas." is not in the citation given.
 * Coulda sworn I had added it. Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)


 * for filmography.
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

-- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds 15:24, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
 * The way you have set up the references is somewhat bizarre. Why?
 * Not bizarre, standard for articles I've written (short footnote style); it makes the article text a heck of a lot easier to read in edit mode. Compare FAs Andjar Asmara, Gagak Item, Sair Tjerita Siti Akbari, Chrisye, etc. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

Right ok. I have re-read it and I think it meets all the criteria. Although having images is not part of the GA criteria, I would recommend adding them if they are freely available, although my somewhat cursory search failed to turn up any.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality: Yes. -
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources: Yes, with short style listing multiple online sources -
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: Since there are no images, this does not apply.
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: doesn't seem to be possible so technically
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

-- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds 12:17, 23 June 2013 (UTC)