Talk:Es ist euch gut, daß ich hingehe, BWV 108/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Coming to this soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * his second cantata cycle Readers may not at once understand what this means
 * linked now --GA


 * coming of the spirit I am not well-acquainted with Christian lore, so unless "the spirit" is something that would be known to lay Christians, I would like this to be clear on what "the spirit" means
 * linked now, hope that helps


 *  (alto, tenor and bass, I think the bracket should close after "bass"?
 * yes --GA


 * for the desiring heart Could this be clearer?
 * summary for "The word "Herz" (heart) is rendered in sighing motifs, intensified by following rests." - could you help?
 * Alright, I get it now. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 15:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)


 * History and words
 * The majority of the first para looks unsourced.
 * repeated --GA


 * a new librettist Christiana Mariana von Ziegler Comma after "librettist"
 * yes --GA


 * although we do not know for sure when he began work on them "it is not known" is the more common way to write this on WP, I think
 * yes --GA


 * Maybe link "movement"
 * done, lead already --GA


 * Music
 * the mood of greieving at parting I think it should be "grieving", unless you are strictly quoting from a source
 * yes --GA


 * St Matthew Passion Another cantata? Should be clearer
 * the link to the piece is from the aria --GA

That's it from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:29, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you, again! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:40, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Happy to promote. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 15:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)