Talk:Es wartet alles auf dich, BWV 187/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)

I'll check this over soon. JAG UAR   19:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)


 * " Es wartet alles auf dich (Everything waits for You), BWV 187" - not sure why this is in bold when the other articles I've reviewed didn't have this in bold. No concern, of course; just nitpicking
 * Ideally the lead should be condensed into two paragraphs instead of one large middle paragraph and two short sentences
 * It's bold in all articles when I write them because it's a redirect, and known better by English-speaking people than the long German. We have a user who likes to change it to a link. For me, the bolding is more important, and the link can be found in the infobox and a footnote, for those who really don't know what BWV means. --GA


 * " The duration of the cantata has been stated as 25 minutes" - why has been stated? By whom? Perhaps it would sound better just as The duration of the cantata is 25 minutes or even The cantata is around 25 mintues long.
 * Someone worded it like that, and I keep copying, but like yours better. - "by Dürr", the ref.


 * "edited by Leo Treitler, with a critical report in 1967" - how about edited by Leo Treitler, followed by a critical report in 1967}
 * like it --GA

I couldn't find anything major enough to put this review on hold, so I'm going to pass it outright. It is well written, comprehensive and all of the sources check out. I noticed that you also improved some things carried over from the previous review too! JAG UAR   19:37, 28 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Did you see my growing Christmas greeting, with a link from the lead image on my talk? It's also for you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:48, 28 December 2017 (UTC)
 * That's lovely! Thanks Gerda. JAG  UAR   19:52, 28 December 2017 (UTC)