Talk:Esau Khamati Oriedo

Please note
The comments below were part of the dialog in the preliminary draft stages of creating this article. Appropriate input and all comments were incorporated accordingly. Antecedently, the article does meet, and in many regards exceeds, pertinent criteria! It is colorable and replete with documentation. Thus, the comments below should be discarded or archived; and should not be part of search results. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.107.198.198 (talk) 02:09, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Regards, Ground Zero | t 02:13, 30 May 2014 (UTC)

Length of lead
The lead in this is article is 16 paragraphs long. This is more than just a summary; the lead is the size of a small article! MOS:LEAD states that a lead section should contain no more than four well-composed paragraphs Is there any way to merge this into the body of the article? -- Millionsandbillions (talk) 19:23, 26 October 2017 (UTC)