Talk:Esquina Común/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 04:50, 11 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: TrademarkedTWOrantula (talk · contribs) 01:08, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

Round 2! TWOrantula TM (enter the web) 01:08, 21 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Looks like everything's good to go. I'll be back...  TWOrantula  TM (enter the web) 01:56, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Quickfail?

 * ✅ Spotted no cleanup banners or citation needed tags.
 * ✅ Article is stable.
 * ✅ Earwig shows no copyvios.
 * ✅ First GA review, so no previous mistakes to note.
 * ✅ No obvious issues found in article.

Lead

 * originally founded in the living room of their residence - of their “house”?
 * “Following a review” -> After being reviewed
 * “the restaurant increased its popularity” -> the restaurant became popular.
 * What year did they relocate in? (important to mention in lead)
 * “upon learning” -> upon discovering
 * They describe Esquina Común as a clandestine terrace - Who is “they”?
 * They describe Esquina Común as a clandestine terrace and the restaurant serves Mexican and Spanish dishes. -> Described as a clandestine terrace, the restaurant serves Mexican and Spanish cuisine.
 * I heard this restaurant can only be booked on Instagram. Is that why the IG account is considered the official website?
 * All changed. They don't have an official website, so I used their most immediate official channel

Description

 * food restaurant
 * Did some copyediting for you
 * Thanks

History

 * González had additional training in Peru; she previously worked at Expendio de Maíz, a restaurant in Mexico City. -> González previously worked at Expendio de Maíz, a restaurant in Mexico, and in Peru.
 * was established in...
 * Not sure what "rented department" means (also, the lead says they established the restaurant in their own house)
 * Reworded (both)


 * Come to think of it, which white building is the restaurant in? The one with the red wall?
 * before moving the tables on the terrace - Relevant? If it is, reword to "before the terrace was furnished"
 * Yes, the sources mention that terrace


 * Contradiction: History paragraph says tables could "serve up to 14 diners", but in the description paragraph, it says the restaurant's seating capacity "has space for 30 people".
 * That part of the history refers to the Roma apartment. They relocated to Condesa to the pictured location that can serve up to 30 people, as described in the description.


 * TBD
 * Thank you for the review. I added a few menu options as well. (CC) Tb hotch ™ 04:40, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

History (continued)

 * After the diners' reservation was confirmed, they were informed of the location. - Huh? I'm not sure how this is part of the history section.
 * Moved to description

Reception

 * All is good!
 * Thanks for the copyedit. (CC) Tb hotch ™ 01:47, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Spotchecking

 * Three sources... go!
 * #4 ✅
 * #7 ✅
 * #11 ✅