Talk:Ester Peony/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Delink Canada per MOS:OVERLINK


 * "Peony started to compose music for Romanian artists before gaining recognition for her YouTube covers in 2015." - better; before gaining recognition for posting covers on YouTube in 2015.

Early life and career

 * "There, she showed special interest in music " - how about showed a particular interest or a similarily worded sentence?


 * "under her mononym Ester in the winter of 2014." - try to avoid using seasons in a time frame per MOS:SEASON


 * "which was playlisted by native radio and television stations." - does the text in bold refer to national and/or local radio/television stations?
 * ✅ It refers to national stations; I changed that now.

Artistry and personal life

 * "Her stage name features the mentioning of" - mentions


 * "In turn, the singer's first name Ester has an Arabic background could mean "star" in Old Persian " - that could mean

This is nice and neat article on Peony. Nothing too major to be addressed in this review. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review :) I think I've addressed everything. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:14, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Lovely. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 4 August 2019 (UTC)