Talk:Eternal Pyre/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   01:13, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

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 * Release date needs source
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Recording studio needs source
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Eternal Pyre features three tracks total -> in
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Their performance was positivly commented on, saying that "King and Jeff Hanneman riff like they're summoning a storm of thunder, lightning and human blood," and was also noted to be a "low-tuned, two-string vamp that slithers into the foreground creates a tension as Lombardo's cymbals call the band into the riff that opens the tune. It's slow, meaty, unrelenting in its tautness. When Araya's voice comes in, the whole track is off the rails and stays there" "War Ensemble" was filmed live from Germany, and contains four minutes of studio footage. Lyrics were said to "please fans still harboring a grudge from Catholic school." -> run-on. Needs to be cut up and some quotes need to be filtered.
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Eternal Pyre generally not received well by critics -> re-write
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * The extended play was, however, generally well-received by fans, despite having a limited number of copies available. -> Source?
 * Since it charted in four different places, it was probably well received by critics, and its limited copies is verified elsewhere. Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * With a limited pressing of 1,000 copies, was exclusively -> Fix up
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Originally, it was thought that the extended play would feature a live version of "Dead Skin Mask" instead of the live version of "War Ensemble", and also was thought to have featured the "Live Intrusion" video, described as "a five-minute clip of the Slayer fan who carved the band's name into his forearm." -> should consider splitting
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Personnel -> Needs sources
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Hit parade isn't a chart. Its the official chart for Switzerland.
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Chart should be capitalized
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)


 * The countries listed should have links to their providers. AKA UK -> (BPI)
 * Fixed Crowz  RSA  00:56, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

That's all, fix these please.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   18:13, 11 November 2010 (UTC)