Talk:Ethanol-induced non-lamellar phases in phospholipids

Currently Editing
Hello I'm Dream22. I'm currently editing this page. I will be adding information thorughout the week and would like for people to review the article and make changes as needed. Thank you for you interest in this subject.

Dream22 (talk) 19:23, 21 April 2009 (UTC)Dream22

(Moved from article page) I will be adding information throughout the week and would like to gain feedback from readers before my final submission as part of a course and future editing. I'm currently part of the WP:UFCHEM group. Therefore, please do not delete this article. --Dream22 (talk) 00:08, 23 April 2009 (UTC)Dream22


 * You added a lot, however, you need to do a better job of referencing. There are numerous places where you continue to cite the same manuscript. Is it possible to find other sources that corroborate the findings within that paper? It's typically not good form to cite the same reference 5-6 times within a paragraph. This will be a good learning experience for when you work on the introduction to your dissertation or your written oral document. Please modify. --Gfanucci (talk) 12:39, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

The article title
It seems to me that this article is about how ethanol can cause local non-bilayer formations in biological bilayers. By this description the article is about bilayers, biomembranes or phospholipid bilayers. But the current title says it is about phospholipids. So there is definitely a need for change, but I don't really know in which direction. Just to get the ball rolling, I suggest "Local ethanol induced disturbances in biomembrane bilayer structures". --Ettrig (talk) 14:25, 8 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes, the title and content should be fixed, which is not so easy.My very best wishes (talk) 22:48, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Analytical techniques
This section should be moved/merged to another article, lipid bilayer characterization.Jajava (talk) 07:23, 12 September 2013 (UTC)