Talk:Ether One

Some feedback
czar 20:25, 13 December 2015 (UTC)
 * There is too much direct quoting in this article. Everything should be paraphrased apart from specific phrases that can be put no other way.
 * The lede doesn't accurately summarize the article. For instance, it doesn't mention puzzles or any detail about the development process. More can be said about the Reception section too.
 * Summarize the aggregate opinion with human-friendly context, e.g., rather than