Talk:Ethics of circumcision/Archive 1

Bioethics authorities
The bioethics of male circumcision is being increasingly questioned by bioethics authorities. A page is needed to air this controversy.Robert Blair 05:21, 26 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Is conclusion appropriate?
Forgive me if this is already covered but is it considered NPOV for an encyclopia article to include a conclusion? I know that the conclusion is pretty inclusive and non-judgemental, but I just question its place. Sirkumsize 01:33, 25 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * I don't know about its being NPOV, but having a conclusion smacks of original research. An essay has a conclusion to sum up the points the author was trying to make. An encyclopdia article should be a summary of the conclusions that original researchers have already come to in their published work. --Angr 05:39, 25 Mar 2005 (UTC)

NPOV
Robert Blair, what on earth were you thinking when you made this edit? Are you aware that Wikipedia has an NPOV (neutral point of view) policy? I've made necessary changes to bring it some way towards neutrality. I've removed Van Howe (since it is flawed and far from definitive), and instead have noted the controversy and linked to medical analysis of circumcision. This improves the article because readers now have access to all the information, rather than just Van Howe's tripe. I've also removed the sentence about physician's refusal because it is covered elsewhere in the article. - Jakew 15:31, 1 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Maybe Jakew should get a new hobby instead of obsessing over cutting people's penises.--68.217.167.115 (talk) 20:55, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Revert
Robert Blair, why did you revert my edit to the human rights paragraph? I carefully read the links and edited that section for factual accuracy.


 * There is nothing in Smith's article to suggest that The Netherlands Institute of Human Rights shares Smith's belief's - it's not a formal statement on her employer's behalf. It should say that it is her opinion.
 * Again, Gulbrandsen does not appear to speak for Norwegian Council for Medical Ethics. It's just a letter in a journal, and an individual's interpretation. The paper discusses ritual circumcision only (which should be mentioned explicitly), and doesn't seem to discuss human rights - only ethics.
 * Lastly, why did you remove the explanation of the purpose of Attorneys for the Rights of the Child? (", which campaigns against circumcision,"? It's perfectly true, and informative.

I've reverted your revert. - Jakew 00:21, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Jakew, your sentence reads One author's interpretation of a statement by the Norwegian Council for Medical Ethics claims that the Council has determined that ritual child circumcision violates important principles of medical ethics. This seems to be redundantly qualified. (interpretation...claims that) Please correct. And I invoke your "principle of one". "One author" should be "An author", so as not to suggest others in the Council state the opposite. DanP 01:28, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Happy now? - Jakew 01:39, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The Norwegian report is simply reporting the action of a professional body - The Norwegian Council for Medical Ethics. it is not a letter. There is no controversy about it. All of this qualification is unnecessary and inappropriate. - Robert Blair (sig added by Jakew)


 * It is most certainly a letter, by a single author. Your change is bad, but I cannot currently undo it due to the 3RR. I have made some NPOV changes to the article (please stop this POV pushing. See Wikipedia is not a soapbox). - Jakew 02:20, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)

It is not a letter. It simply is a report by a reporter of an event. It should be no more controversial than a report of a traffic accident. It was published in a Norwegian medical journal. My change is correct.

Also, there is no controversy about the foreskin being protective. It protects against meatitis, meatal ulceration, and meatal stenosis. This is well documented in the literature. Robert Blair 03:24, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Incorrect. It appears to be a letter, by a Pal Gulbrandsen.
 * Secondly, there is indeed controversy about the foreskin being protective. While it is true that some authors claim protection against the meatal problems you mention, it is impossible to diagnose these problems in an uncircumcised child. That is to say: there is no way of knowing whether uncircumcised children have fewer problems or not - they just can't be recognised and treated. - Jakew 03:29, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Seems that the pro-mutilation side (even if correct) isn't actually diagnosing higher rates of HIV in the intact men in the US. They are projecting it, even before we are born.  If your side can claim broad magical powers of the mutilated penis, why does this not hold when the protection is based on having the whole organ? DanP 14:51, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)

It is not a letter. Gulbrandsen is a reporter, reporting the news. He does not represent the Norwegian Council on Medical Ethics. This is a news report.

I have revised the text to eliminate the controversy and therefore, I have removed the disputed tags because they are no longer necessary.

Robert Blair 19:03, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * It quite clearly is a letter. What possible reason do you have for believing otherwise?
 * I have removed your hopeless POV pushing, and restored the disputed tags. It is considered very bad form to remove a disputed tag before a dispute has been cleared up - please do not do so again. I reverted rather than editing, because you completely reverted my hard work in NPOVing your previous edit. You're obviously just going to replace my carefully NPOVed text with POV rubbish, so there appears little point in trying. - Jakew 22:29, 4 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * 1) A google search of the website produces 555 articles by Pal Gulbrandsen. Clearly, he is a staffer/reporter for the journal, not a contributing letter writer.


 * 1) Jacqueline Smith is/was on the staff the Netherlands Institute of Human Rights. Her paper was published in a book produced by the Institute. The book is named To Baehr in Our Minds: Essays in Human Rights from the Heart of the Netherlands. If the Institute did not accept her conclusions, it would not have published the paper.


 * I don't believe what I'm reading! Are you seriously suggesting that publishers always believe every word they print? Of course they don't: they're essays, not policy statements. - Jakew 01:55, 5 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Recent edit
I've made a number of changes to the article. Some comments are in the text, but to summarise:
 * Introduction: tried to streamline it and ensure that it is NPOV. It's ok to summarise different views here, but we shouldn't make a case either way, or even present all the evidence. An introduction ought to be concise.
 * Added comment about AAP Bioethics approval of AAP statement.
 * Removed cite of Hill on "parent-centered" view. We should not cite an opponent of that view when describing a view. This is like citing a Creationist group when giving a description of evolution.
 * Changed links to original sources, where available.

-Jakew 00:04, 6 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The use of Moses et al. (1998) to refute sexual evidence is inappropriate since this article was published prior to the publication of many recent articles on sexual effects.

Robert Blair 16:36, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * It is entirely relevant, as a discussion of the evidence in 1998. Some studies have been published since that time, but none have investigated the question of the alleged sexual nature of the ridged band. I have restored it, added a caveat about Denniston's claim (articles in a non-peer-reviewed journal are less credible), and added other studies. - Jakew 19:29, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Canadian Children's Rights Council
DanP, would you explain why you feel the article benefits by including views on medical benefits rather than ethics? - Jakew 00:14, 9 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * You raise a good point. I took my quote entirely out-of-context, and I can see where it could be interpreted as medical.  In the paragraph I meant to quote more appropriately, at issue was the notion that the child-centered-view is not served by the medical debate.  There is a lot of overlap, I suppose. I will fix it.  DanP 00:52, 9 Feb 2005 (UTC)

NPOV?
DanP, could you explain why you feel it is POV to state that an article was not peer-reviewed? This is, after all, the truth. - Jakew 20:02, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * It is a cheap shot and off-topic. Plus there is an indirect reference to Flesh and Blood: Perspectives on the Problem of Circumcision in Contemporary Society, which presumably is the source for the data (I haven't read it).  We should say what an article says, not what it doesn't say.  If not, this would open up a new avenue of Wikipedia bias, as we ought to add disclaimer to every instance where an article isn't peer-reviewed.  I hope you can agree there is no precedent for that.  DanP 20:43, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC).

My god this jakew person has an extreme obsession with cutting people's penises and trying to make it sound pretty.--68.217.167.115 (talk) 21:04, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Medical views
The medical views section had become bloated, wordy, and unsuited to the needs of a bioethics article. This section has been replaced with an ethical views section. Robert Blair 14:31, 12 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Disputed tag
I propose to remove the disputed tag after 24 hours unless there are further disputes raised.

Robert Blair 02:06, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * It is more conventional to remove disputed tags once disputes have been resolved. - Jakew 11:03, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I think they have been resolved. Robert Blair 13:54, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Yes jakew stop your compulsive interest with snipping other people's penises.--68.217.167.115 (talk) 21:36, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Knee-jerk reverts
Jakew, you need to state a reason for a revert, such as factually inaccurate material. Knee-jerk type shout of POV pushing are not satisfactory. "I don't like it" is not sufficient. You have not provided justification for your revert and I have undone it.

Robert Blair 20:39, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Robert, I've tried time and time again to get you to read Wiki's neutral point of view policy, but you continue to make such POV edits. Not only this, but when I try to work with you, editing for NPOV, you just replace it with your own version without comment. You ignore objections on talk pages. You remove disputed notices in spite of the fact that it is perfectly obvious from the edit history that there is an ongoing dispute. Needless to say, I'm running out of patience with you.


 * Here is an explanation:
 * You replace a carefully balanced description of studies claiming both benefits and harms of circumcision to two literature "surveys" (both by Fleiss) that claim protective roles of the foreskin. Where is the balance? Where is the comment about surveys highlighting increased risks caused by the presence of the foreskin?
 * You replace the "alternative view" to Povenmire (re the AAP Bioethics approval of the AAP policy) with a rather irrelevant statement about the AAP.
 * You insert the following statement which is a) not correct English, and b) unsupported. "however, are limited to the granting of permission for diagnosis and treatment of disease, but non-therapeutic circumcision is neither."
 * You include the comment about AAP "although it appears to be in conflict with their previous declarations." - this is incredibly POV. If you had said "though some argue that is it in conflict..." it might be better. But as it is, you're just pushing your POV.


 * So let's summarise: you've replaced balanced, NPOV discussion with one-sided "studies" by anti-circ activists that support your POV. You've replaced disagreement with your fellow activists with vague and irrelevant statements. You've included unsupported (and non-English) statements. And you've pushed your POV when discussing those who disagree with you.


 * POV pushing that deserved to be reverted, and was. If you'd like to propose future changes first on the talk page, I'm happy to help you try to ensure that they are NPOV. But this sort of thing is riduculous. - Jakew 14:01, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Jake, the article has been revised to meet your stated objections. The literature surveys, one by Fleiss and one by Cold, provide information on the functions of the foreskin. This is essential background to any ethical discussion. They do not address whether any particular foreskin should be excised. Information on that is provided by links to other articles as you suggested.

Robert Blair 17:41, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Ok, if you insist, we'll keep Fleiss and Cold (although I have to say because both are written by NOCIRC activists who have been known to be less than scrupulous with the truth somewhat lessens their credibility), but we'll include Moses et al and Schoen in order to balance things.
 * "Non-therapeutic circumcision of children is a preventable injury." is a POV statement. Injury:
 * Damage or harm done to or suffered by a person or thing
 * A particular form of hurt, damage, or loss
 * So clearly if one sees circumcision as harmful, one thinks it an injury. If, however, one regards it as an improvement, it is not. Hence it is POV. I've restored the original phrasing.
 * I've removed subheadings for views as their description is inherently POV.
 * I've removed "however, are limited to the..." as it is still not a complete sentence.
 * - Jakew 18:22, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * But it IS an injury, like declawing cats or body piercing. Cuzandor 00:15, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes it certainly is. This jakew person must be in the midst of some kind of pro-circumcision psychosis.--68.217.167.115 (talk) 21:31, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

Function versus medical benefits
Jakew: you are trying to counterbalance information on loss of function with claimed medical benefits. This is unacceptable. You must counterbalance loss of function with articles that claim no loss of function if you can find them.

It is not appropriate to introduce alleged medical benefits into this article because they are discussed in the medical analysis article. The alternative is to introduce articles showing a net harm caused by circumcision.

Robert Blair 11:44, 16 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Robert, you've already introduced "loss" of function - hence implying a disadvantage of circumcision. The obvious balance for this is articles showing benefits.
 * Since you feel it is not appropriate to introduce benefits, I'm sure you'll feel that it is equally inappropriate to introduce harms. Hence, I've removed the studies you cite.
 * Above, you'll find discussion of Fleiss and Cold, and why I chose to include a balance. Medical benefits are clearly relevant to ethics, but as I say, we can remove both. However, including your papers but no balance is simply POV pushing, and is not an option.
 * Saying "without medical indication" is redundant, as I've commented in the text.
 * I've commented out "to grow and develop free from preventable illness or injury", since without the comment that anti-circ activists consider circumcision to be an injury, it is irrelevant and out of place.
 * I've also tidied up the quotes.
 * Otherwise, I've no other major objections to your edits. - Jakew 13:03, 16 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Go away jakew you are far to psychotically pro-circumcision to be trusted anywhere near this article.--68.217.167.115 (talk) 21:34, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

POV pushing by Jake Waskett
Jake:

When you use a heading like "Mainstream view", you indicate that that view is more favoured than the others and the other views are fringe views. That is not accurate because some very responsible people and organizations are taking up something other than what you call the mainstream view. Such POV pushing is completely unacceptable under WikiPolicy.

Robert Blair 01:06, 27 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Ok, I see what you mean. Equally, "traditional parent-centered" and "child-centered" are unacceptable, since they imply that one is centered on the child's best interests, and the other is not (in truth, both are based on different interpretations of "best interests"). I'm removing the headings altogether until we can agree on headings that we're both ok with. - Jakew 18:24, 27 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The article needs headings to make it readable.

Parent-centered simple indicates that the parents' feelings are put first.

Child-centered means that the child's best interests are put first.

They are descriptive, not POV pushing.

If you don't like that please suggest some other neutral descriptive heading.

Robert Blair 00:54, 28 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Robert, temporarily removing headings so that we can find some we both agree on is hardly POV pushing. Please try to keep your edit summaries realistic.
 * Yes, I agree that headings will improve the article, but not if they're misleading or POV.
 * The problem lies in the fact that every point of view on the subject puts the child's best interests first. I challenge you to find me a parent who doesn't act in what they perceive to be in their child's best interests.
 * The difference between the positions is that what you call the "child-centered" view assumes that non-circumcision is always in the best interests of the child. In other words, it takes best interests out of the hands of those close to the child - parents, medical professionals, and so on, and assumes that the only one competent to make that judgement is the ethicist proposing the view. Maybe we should talk about "Parent-incompetent" and "Parent-competent" views. - Jakew 12:20, 28 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Jakew you and your pro-circumcision mongering must be silenced.--68.217.167.115 (talk) 21:35, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

What about cases of parental disagreement?
One of the problems of granting parents the right to decide whether a male child may be circumcised is that parents do not always agree. Who is to decide when parents do not agree? Michael Glass 06:38, 19 July 2005 (UTC)


 * Isn't this just a special case of parental disagreement in general? - Jakew 09:54, 19 July 2005 (UTC)

Yes it is, but this does not make it any easier to deal with. Michael Glass 02:04, 21 July 2005 (UTC)

Three or two?
The following line was recently removed on the basis of being "incoherent" only to be restored by me.
 * Infant circumcision is ethical, provided the patient chooses it

I don't see anything incoherent about this. Essentially, it's a statement to the effect that someone should be able to choose to have a circumcision, but that this choice should not be made for them in their infancy by their guardians. I suppose you can (and, most likely, do) disagree with it, but that's not really important. Al 18:06, 31 May 2006 (UTC)
 * It's a rhetorical device; infants can't choose things. Jayjg (talk) 18:08, 31 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Of course they can, what they can't do is say what they choose. Thats like saying eskimos can't choose anything because they don't know your language. 201.23.64.2 01:15, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Actually it isn't. The Eskimo have their own language. Unfortunately, the vast majority of people don't speak it. That issue is entirely separate, and is really irrelevant. I'm fairly certain that infants can't consent to a medical procedure. Anyone without language skills doesn't have the same cognitive ability that someone with language possesses. It's not that these infants can't speak English, or can't write in French, but rather that they have no concept of language. Without that, they have no ability to comprehend the world in a way that would allow them to consent to a medical procedure. . . .wow. that was long :) Mike.lifeguard 15:18, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

recent HIV study
I ran across a reference to this recent study in the BBC News today. It should probably be mentioned somewhere in our section on the HIV debate. (Recall also that our section on the HIV debate should be to summarize what the medical community says on the subject, pro or con, not to argue about it ourselves.) --Delirium 02:21, 11 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Anti-circumcision activists claim that the foreskin is an important erogenous zone and that its loss results in decreased sensation and plesasure. This can explain the decreased HIV infection rate: If a man's pleasure is decreased, he will find sex less pleasurable. Finding sex less pleasurable, he will be less diven to have sex as often. Having sex less often, he is less likely to have unprotected sex with an infected partner. If the rate of unprotected sex with infected partners decreases, so too will the incidence of HIV infection. This is of course, completely OR, but food for thought nonetheless.Christopher 03:02, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

Female Genital Cutting study
This is in regards to the recently added powerpoint link; on slide 36, there are no units so I am unsure, but it appears that this study shows that male circumcision seems to increse a womans risk of contracting HIV. Am I interpreting this correctly? If so, I would sure like to see a copy of this study that has been published in a peer reviewed joural, preferably with no magenta background. Christopher 05:18, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
 * The RR (relative risk) for male circumcised vs neither circumcised is 0.97, which is a very slight protective effect. However, the finding was not statistically significant (95%CI: 0.66-1.42).
 * Elsewhere in the literature, one study has shown increased risk:
 * Chao A, et al. Risk factors associated with prevalent HIV-1 infection among pregnant women in Rwanda. Int J Epidemiol 1994; 23(2):371-80
 * And four have shown decreased risk:
 * Fonck K, et al. Pattern of sexually transmitted diseases and risk factors among women attending an STD referral clinic in Nairobi, Kenya. Sex Transm Dis. 2000 Aug;27(7):417-23
 * Hunter DJ, et al. Sexual behavior, sexually transmitted diseases, male circumcision and risk of HIV infection among women in Nairobi, Kenya. AIDS. 1994 Jan;8(1):93-9
 * Kapiga SH, et al. The incidence of HIV infection among women using family planning methods in Dar es Salaam, Tanzania. AIDS. 1998 Jan 1;12(1):75-84
 * (news article on most recent study)
 * Studies to investigate the effect of FGC on HIV have, with the exception of Stallings, found no difference.
 * As an aside, while our anon editor confidently asserts that this study "controlled for all possible confounding factors", the source says otherwise: "There are several important risk factors which were not collected in the 2003-04 THIS which might be explanatory confounders of this perplexing conundrum, including ethnic group, age at time of circumcision and type of circumcision" (37) "As no biological mechanism seems plausible, we conclude that it is due to irreducible confounding" (38) This latter statement also contradicts another of the anon's arguments. Even if the text did not violate WP:NPOV and WP:NOR, misrepresenting sources is clearly unacceptable. Jakew 10:26, 25 September 2006 (UTC)


 * So that is what the 95%CI meant.Christopher 15:41, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Yep, it's the confidence interval. Jakew 16:03, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
 * — Possible single purpose account: Jakew (talk • contribs) has made few or no other contributions outside this topic. . Tit for tat 13:58, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

Article is a mess
This article is a mess. Half of it is original research, a quarter quotes sources that aren't directly relevant, but are introduced in original synthesis, and the other quarter aren't presented neutrally.

I can see three options:
 * 1) Delete it
 * 2) Drastically cut it down (to 1-2 paragraphs), then merge this into circumcision
 * 3) Make a list (here) of all suitable sources, then perform a neutral, source-based rewrite.

Comments? Jakew 10:01, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Merge it into circumcision? No. Circumcision is already a juggernaught, it needs to be broken into more subpages itself. Merging this page before that point would be counterproductive. I can't imagine that we can't find enough sources for a good article: we should find sources to back up the currently unsourced claims and delete any claims that can't be sourced.Christopher 12:50, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
 * "we should find sources to back up the currently unsourced claims" - with respect, I think that's a mistake. That's how opinion pieces are written, with the framework existing first, and the sources slotted into the holes. To achieve a balanced, thorough article we need to use an approach more like a systematic review, carefully identifying every relevant article, then building the article's structure from the sources. Harder work, I must admit, but I think that it's essential with controversial subjects.
 * I take your point regarding merging, though. Jakew 13:01, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
 * I find it easier to add references than to rewrite an article. If sources can't be easily found, then the claim has to go, but we should at least make an effort to provide sources before we delete.Christopher 20:02, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Alright, I don't think it's essential that we're in complete agreement on this, since we clearly agree on the immediately pressing task: identifying sources. I therefore propose that we focus on that and postpone this discussion until such time as it is needed. Agree? Jakew 12:21, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

Off-topic
I've moved the following from the article:


 * The Canadian Children's Rights Council position states:
 * Our position is that all children should be protected from all forms of genital mutilation (circumcision of all types) including but not limited to, circumcision that doesn't affect sexual function or that may be viewed by others as sexual enhancement surgery. Male circumcision does affect sexual function. http://www.canadiancrc.com/circumcision/circumcision.htm.

Unfortunately, the source cited doesn't refer to ethics (or bioethics) explicitly.

There is some material, relating to claims of mutilation or human rights, that does not belong with the article's present title. I would not be opposed to renaming the article with a broader scope (I would also support using the common term 'ethics' in preference to 'bioethics'). Jakew 15:04, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Also:
 * The Royal Australasian College of Physicians comments that "The possibility that routine circumcision may contravene human rights has been raised because circumcision is performed on a minor and is without proven medical benefit. Whether these legal concerns are valid will be known only if the matter is determined in a court of law."

Jakew 15:16, 16 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Re Canadian Children's Rights Council: That's obviously talking about ethics, even if the word "ethics" isn't used.  "Rights" and "should" are clues.  I think it should be put back in.  The RACP quote is also relevant.  "human rights" is clearly an ethical concern.  --Coppertwig 00:04, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * That's an interpretation of the sources. WP:NOR requires that the sources are "directly related" to the subject of the article, and that "any facts, opinions, interpretations, definitions, and arguments published by Wikipedia must already have been published by a reliable publication in relation to the topic of the article." Jakew 00:14, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * These are clearly directly related to the subject of the article, as I note above, except possibly the last sentence by RACP which is about legal stuff. Also, they're quotes, so the opinions expressed have been published.
 * How about changing the title of the article to something like "Ethics and legality of routine infant circumcision"? --Coppertwig 15:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * They have been published, but the problem is that there's no evidence that they are directly related to the subject of the article. I could say that prevention of any disease is obviously an ethical issue, and include a bunch of articles on those, but in doing so I'd be making a synthesis of published sources. Instead, we need to quote what others have explicitly said about the subject matter.
 * As it happens, the RACP do mention human rights briefly in the bioethics section of their report. I replaced the previously included quote with that one, because the relevance is asserted by the source. Jakew 15:13, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I withdraw my suggestion for article title. I'd forgotten there's already Circumcision and law. --Coppertwig 00:48, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * An article that merely talks about how to prevent disease is not making an ethical statement. But those quotes clearly are.  --Coppertwig 00:51, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Subjective assessment is a problem. One person's "ethical statement" is another's "crackpot rant". Unless sources explicitly state that they are relevant by discussing the article's subject, we can't be sure that they are. Let's keep the relevance verifiable. Jakew 09:53, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Copying/moving information from Circumcision
...as part of a plan to shorten Circumcision. See Talk:Circumcision and WP:SUMMARY. --Coppertwig 23:46, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

I copied this here but it was deleted, so I put it at Medical analysis of circumcision: " The American Medical Association defines “non-therapeutic” circumcision as the non-religious, non-ritualistic, not medically necessary, elective circumcision of male newborns. It states that medical associations in the US, Australia, and Canada do not recommend the routine non-therapeutic circumcision of newborns. ". --Coppertwig 00:53, 26 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Medical analysis is probably the best place to put it... Jakew 09:41, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

This seems already pretty much covered on this page, so I'm not copying it over: " Therefore, circumcising infants is controversial. Those advocating circumcision assert that circumcision is a significant public health measure, preventing infections, and slowing down the spread of AIDS. " --Coppertwig 00:59, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Benatar and Benatar are now referred to (at least) twice; these could be combined, and some other smoothing out of the text could be done near where I added some stuff including "Views differ on whether ...". --Coppertwig 01:10, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * We refer to two different articles by the same authors. I'll try to get the text up to standard again when the additions have stabilised. Jakew 09:41, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I've been trying, but not always succeeding, to leave these pages in no worse state than before I dumped info into them. Again, I might or might not help later but first am focussing more on getting the Circumcision article shortened. --Coppertwig 14:23, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Somerville reference: It was cited twice in the article. On Aug. 17, Jakew commented out one of these, leaving the other as a blank reference. I'm filling in the citation info into the blank reference, leaving the other one still commented out, so that there won't be a blank reference in the reference list. --Coppertwig 17:18, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Oops! Thanks for spotting that.
 * Incidentally, I commented it out, as I think I said in the edit summary, because it does not seem to argue what the (commented-out) text states. Jakew 17:22, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * No problem: it gives me a chance to feel I'm not just making the page worse. --Coppertwig 17:39, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

FGC
Jakew removed this: "Another argument questions why the genital cutting of males is allowed while the genital cutting of females is prohibited. ". What do you think about the idea of putting this at Circumcision and law? It looks to me more relevant to ethics, but maybe you have a different idea of what fits under the topic of ethics. (Or is "bioethics" much different from "ethics"? I would think it's the same as long as you're talking about biological things like circumcision. Would it fit better if the page name had "ethics" instead of "bioethics"?) --Coppertwig 17:35, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, I suppose it could go under law. Trouble is, it isn't actually law per se, but arguing about what the law should or should not be. Whereever it does go, we can balance it with this(point 18).
 * I think 'ethics' would be a better title for this article. I'm not opposed to something like 'Ethical and human rights issues in the circumcision debate', but it's horribly cumbersome. Jakew 18:33, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
 * On second thought, I don't see a place to fit it in neatly at Circumcision and law. It would probably require creating a new section like "legal arguments" or something. --Coppertwig 18:48, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

Duplicate references: I checked the list of references and removed all duplicates. --Coppertwig 19:39, 26 August 2007 (UTC)

POV in the Intro
changed from: Those opposing circumcision, however, question the legality of infant circumcision by asserting that infant circumcision is a human rights violation or a sexual assault. to: Those opposing circumcision, however, argue that infant circumcision infringes upon individual bodily rights and thus represents a human rights violation.

The original wording misrepresents the mainline arguments put forth by those who argue against the acceptability of infant circumcision - Sexual assault as it is universally understood is any physical contact of a sexual nature without voluntary consent; I think it goes without saying that there is no evidence that this extremist viewpoint is representative of the mainline arguments that opponents of neonatal circumcision present. Secondly, the procedure can be seen as being incompatible with with certain fundamental ethics principles in medicine; what opponents believe ought be done, legally speaking, to correct this varies.

ex. NPOV :"Animal rights advocates argue that animals should not be regarded as property, or treated as resources for human purposes, but should instead be regarded as legal persons[3] and members of a moral community." POV distortion: "Animal rights advocates argue that treating animals as resources for human purposes should be prohibited, and that meat is murder." Gainstrue 19:34, 23 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Gainstrue, we can't include or exclude an argument based upon whether you, I, or any other editor think it is correct, incorrect, or indeed absurd. All we can do is to report arguments made in published, reliable sources. Jakew 21:03, 23 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Jake, agree, however, I'm not convinced that what was written fairly reflected the sources as much as it was a sensationalist representation of the sources. If you read my reasons for the edit they have nothing to do with my own personal value judgment on the arguments themselves.  I was concerned with which arguments were selected, the appropriateness of selecting these particular arguments, as opposed to the arguments that are more representative of the subject matter - and for what purpose they were selected; namely, to push a POV.  It is not hard to find 'absurdities' on the fringes of any side of an issue... and it is not hard to color an argument with an air of absurdity by excluding the context. I doubt that what was written was by accident, though I could be wrong and it was simply an unintended distortion.


 * Sexual assault? Sure there might be some fringes out there in the opposition to infant circumcision who believe this, but this is hardly a mainline view worthy of being included in a one sentence summary of infant circumcision opposition, and the legality comes secondary; which is why I felt my edit provided a more balanced reflection of the subject matter.


 * For instance: In the circumcision article : "Circumcision advocates argue that circumcision is a significant public health measure, preventing infections, and slowing down the spread of AIDS." if spun from an anti-circumcision POV through the same spin cycle might read "Circumcision advocates argue that all males should be circumcised, and liken circumcision to an AIDS vaccine." - out of context, sensationalist, but not technically false because some do. But would that be appropriate?  Of course not, and that's not about what I or any other editor thinks is correct incorrect or indeed absurd.  Let's try to keep sensationalism where it belongs: in the opeds and blogosphere etc.


 * Anyhow, like you said it is probably unnecessary to be included in the intro.  - Gainstrue 00:41, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Recent edits (Benatar et. al)
Jakew, you have twice reverted my edit where I removed the WP:OR quotation marks around "neither a compelling prophylactic measure nor a form of child abuse" -- which is not present in the available abstract of the source, and removal of the word "therefore" which is not implied nor stated by the source. Explain this change, confirm/show that the quote exists in the source, and confirm that the word "therefore" is warranted.

Also, you have replaced an incorrect two-line summary by including a long quote. Benatar et al. are quoted again a few lines later, making their contribution to this article section the largest of any source, including the medical associations. Why did you do this? As you are fond of resisting edits (especially material critical of circumcision) with the explanation that the information is "too long," please justify this large addition. Blackworm (talk) 18:07, 19 November 2007 (UTC)


 * Blackworm, there is no conceivable reason why you should expect the quote to appear in the abstract: it is perfectly legitimate to quote from the full text of a paper. Rather than assuming OR, I recommend that you first check the source (you can either purchase it, or you'll find an online reprint if you try Googling for the title).
 * Had you bothered to check the source, you would have found the 'conclusion' section, the first two sentences of which read: "We have examined both conceptual issues and empirical evidence pertaining to neonatal circumcision of boys. Our conclusion is that circumcision is neither a compelling prophylactic measure nor a form of child abuse." (emph added) They continue: For this reason, nontherapeutic circumcision of infant boys is a suitable matter for parental discretion." (emph. added)
 * Please remain civil, Jakew. Thank you for showing this.  I incorrectly assumed the summary was derived from the abstract because that was all I found available, and it had very similar wording. Blackworm (talk) 19:48, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Alright. In future, if you can't find an article, please ask before assuming OR. Also, please do not insert responses in the middle of mine - it makes it very confusing to read. Jakew (talk) 20:16, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * As for the summary, you objected to it but did not specify what, precisely, you objected to, and ignored my request to explain on the talk page. This made it impossible to know which parts of the summary you felt were inaccurate. I therefore substituted exact quotes, which are longer, but uninterpreted. I am happy to work with you on summarising this, but I need you to communicate.
 * You should have asked instead of reverting; see WP:REVERT. The old summary was incorrect, as is plain from the difference between what it said, and the quotes you added.  It also failed WP:WEASEL. Blackworm (talk) 19:48, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Your edit summary was somewhat misleading, Blackworm: the quotes demonstrate that at least a significant part of the summary was accurate. There was a WEASEL problem, but I found it trivial to fix. Jakew (talk) 20:16, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * There are two Benatar sources, and it is appropriate to quote from each.
 * I don't object to that; I object to the overall amount of space devoted to them, and to the unexplained distribution of their opinions into two different parts of the section. Blackworm (talk) 19:48, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, let's work together on summarising the first quote. That'll help. The distribution is due to the different issues discussed: the paragraph beginning with Denniston includes arguments about whether circumcision is harmful, beneficial, or somewhere in between. Discussion of the pros and cons of timing of circumcision is a different issue. Jakew (talk) 20:16, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Finally, while it may be the case in the future that this article is too long, and needs to be split per summary style, that is not presently the case. Jakew (talk) 19:03, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm discussing the relative space alloted to sources, not overall article length. Do you agree there is a limit to how much emphasis we may/should give to one source?  Is it appropriate for Benatar et. al to be quoted at such great length?  I also note that the majority, if not all sources which present arguments unfavourable to circumcision in this section are alloted exactly one sentence each.  Would you object to the expansion of each of these statements to match the current length of the Benatar et. al section? Blackworm (talk) 19:48, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I think it's inappropriate to impose a "sentence limit per source". We need to find the appropriate amount of text to represent each viewpoint fairly, and according to the prominence of that viewpoint. Since summarising the Benatar quotes will probably reduce the length, let's do that before assessing relative weight. Jakew (talk) 20:16, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * How are we to determine what constitutes the "appropriate amount of text to represent each viewpoint fairly?" What procedures, guidelines, or methods shall we use to evaluate the prominence of each viewpoint?  Agreeing on this will help us determine appropriate summaries of the Benatar et al. articles as well as other sources.  Blackworm (talk) 21:01, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * WP:UNDUE suggests: "Articles that compare views should not give minority views as much or as detailed a description as more popular views, and may not include tiny-minority views at all."
 * I note that Fox and Thompson, though they disagree with it, remark on "the emerging consensus, whereby parental choice holds sway". This indicates to me that we should, at the least, try to ensure that we give as much weight to those expressing that viewpoint as those who argue against it. Jakew (talk) 21:08, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

Perplexing
For this article, it is helpful to explain what is meant by 'surrogate consent'. The AAP offers a reasonable definition, and does so within the context of this article, thus it seems appropriate to quote from it. This quote was previously introduced with this text:

"Neonatal circumcision is performed with surrogate consent, for reasons described by the American Academy of Pediatrics:"

With the edit summary "Remove WP:NPOV violation -- we do not necessarily support the AAP's "reasons"", Blackworm changed this to:

"Neonatal circumcision is performed with surrogate consent, which is appropriate according to the American Academy of Pediatrics:"

This seems to miss the point: we're not saying that it is appropriate, just that it occurs, and what it means. Do any reliable sources actually dispute the AAP's explanation? Jakew (talk) 20:36, 19 November 2007 (UTC)


 * We are saying it's appropriate. If we say that that the AAP is providing the "reasons" that neonatal circumcision is performed with surrogate consent, this implies that it is appropriate for neonatal circumcision to be performed, i.e., that there is correctness or "reason" in the current practice.  Compare, "Israeli settlers are routinely harassed and attacked by Palestinians, for reasons described by Hamas: [...]"   I also don't see why the AAP is quoted at length in its own box, drawing extra attention to it, when most of the quoted statement has nothing to do with its introduction. Blackworm (talk) 21:21, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Would anyone claim that it is never appropriate to perform neonatal circumcision? It seems to me that, just as it may occasionally be appropriate to perform neonatal heart surgery, emergencies may occur that make the surgery necessary. Jakew (talk) 21:33, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

A second problem is the bunch of text inserted into the RACP quote. This quote previously served as an introduction to the bioethical controversies involved. With the edit summary "Restore missing context and properly reflect source, rather than cherry-picking conclusions. WP:NPOV", Blackworm inserted material about the timing of circumcision as well as legal issues (which are better suited to inclusion in circumcision and law).

As such, it is not entirely clear what purpose the quote now serves. I'd suggest removing the legal material, and moving the material about timing close to the Benatars' comments on that subject. Jakew (talk) 20:36, 19 November 2007 (UTC)


 * That is your interpretation of what purpose the quote served. Mine is that the quote only served to distort a position and push the POV of parental choice once again.  The part you claim is about timing is actually primarily about who gets to make the decision -- directly related to the last sentence of the quote.  The part you claim is "legal" is directly related to ethics.  What is illegal in this matter is clearly not ethical according to the relevant court.  It is unclear why these two articles are even separated (except as a POV-fork), since the law is derived directly from ethics. Blackworm (talk) 21:21, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Could you please explain how the following pushes the POV of parental choice?
 * "The difficulty with a procedure which is not medically indicated is whether it may still be in the child’s “best interests” (that is, in the case of circumcision, decreasing the risk of UTI and penile cancer, and ensuring acceptance within a religio-cultural group) on the one hand or whether it may constitute an assault upon the child and be a violation of human rights on the other"
 * Your POV on the equivalence of law and ethics is noted. Jakew (talk) 21:33, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * You are making a strawman argument. I claim the summary as a whole pushed that POV, by omitting a large chunk of the paragraph in which the idea of parental choice is challenged.
 * Misrepresentation of another editor's opinion is incivil. "Directly related" does not mean "equivalent," as I am sure you are aware.  Blackworm (talk) 22:19, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * That doesn't make any sense, Blackworm. How can the purpose of the quote be to "push the POV of parental choice", when the quote itself does not advance that position? Jakew (talk) 22:31, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Jakew, the original quote consisted of the part you quoted above, plus the following, "[...] One issue, which is agreed, is that before parents make a decision about circumcision they should have access to unbiased and clear information on the medical risks and benefits of the procedure." Blackworm (talk)  —Preceding comment was added at 22:34, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * That appears to to indicate that this issue is reasonably common ground that's shared by most viewpoints. (I'm not saying that it is common ground, just that this source indicates that it is.) Do you agree? Jakew (talk) 22:43, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * No, I read it as agreement among members of the RACP (or alternately, that it's common ground shared by most, if not all viewpoints inside the RACP). Blackworm (talk) 22:54, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Alright, I can see that that interpretation is also consistent with the language.
 * I propose the following. Let's cut the quote back to just the part that I quoted above, making the quote serve the originally intended (and, I hope you agree, not unreasonable) purpose of introducing some of the issues involved. Then let's take both the "is agreed" and the "arguments to justify" fragments, and find places for them that fit into the narrative flow. Thus, we're not omitting the information, but fitting it into a less 'quotefarm' style of presentation. Does this sound fair? Jakew (talk) 23:11, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Yes, not only fair but better than the current organization of facts. Blackworm (talk) 23:34, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, good. Now although you don't see the "could be seen to be an argument to defer a decision until the individual can express his own preferences" quote as being about timing, do you agree that it is reasonable to present it near to the Benatar quote ("it is far from clear that non-circumcision leaves open a future person’s options in every regard")? Jakew (talk) 13:40, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Sure, putting it right after the Benatar quote sounds fine. Blackworm (talk) 15:57, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Incidentally, upon reflection I think you have a good point that some of the quote is better suited to a legal discussion. I have removed that part.  Blackworm (talk) 23:01, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, thank you. Jakew (talk) 23:11, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

Ethics of neonatal circumcision
Instead of using the word 'bioethics', the title would be clearer if it simply used the word 'ethics', Using a highly unusual word where a much simpler word would do the job just makes things more difficult for the reader. Also, someone concerned with the ethics of infant circumcision would look for that word rather than 'bioethics'.

What do other editors think? Michael Glass (talk) 20:02, 19 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Fully agree. "Bioethics" assigns an immediate medical context to this topic, which is non-neutral considering that the ethics are discussed outside a professional medical context as well.  This article should be called "Ethics of infant male circumcision."  Blackworm (talk) 20:26, 19 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Yes, agree with renaming to "ethics of...". This has been discussed before, and although there was an apparent consensus at the time, it seems that implementing the change was overlooked. I'd also suggest dropping the term "neonatal", as it is overly specific and a poor fit with the article content. "Ethics of circumcision" is a far better title, and a likely search term for anyone seeking information on this topic. Jakew (talk) 22:52, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, Jake and Blackworm. 'Ethics' would be better, so perhaps we could make that change. However, I am unsure about dropping the reference to infant circumcision, as this is the question that excites the most ethical concern. Keeping the focus on infant circumcision means that the discussion would be confined to this practice. Widening the concern to circumcision in general means that other ethical concerns would become relevant, such as the ethical concerns about rolling out circumcision as a partial preventative for the HIV virus and concerns over forced circumcisions of adults and older children. Of course, the two issues are separate, so a lack of consensus about one need not affect the implementation of the other change. Michael Glass (talk) 08:20, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Michael, I wouldn't agree that the issues are entirely separate, but I certainly agree that there are differences, and some arguments raised in the context of infant circumcision make little sense in the context of adult circumcision (the reverse may also be true). There is, however, no reason whatsoever why we cannot dedicate a section (even a large section representing much of the article) to issues specific to infant circumcision.
 * One problem with the current name is that it's too specific for its place in the circumcision hierarchy. There's a mismatch between the scope of the heading in the top-level article and the scope of the article name in the detailed article. At the start of the "Ethical issues" section of the circumcision article, we advise readers: "Main article: Bioethics of neonatal circumcision." Problem is, where should a reader look for information about the ethics of non-neonatal circumcision?
 * Another problem with the current name is that it's more specific than the content. Consider, as one example, the second sentence of the Medical ethics section. "The BMA insists that a non-therapeutic circumcision must not go ahead without the consent of both parents and, if competent, the child himself." If the article were solely about infant circumcision, the last six words would be unnecessary and irrelevant, since if the child is competent, he cannot be an infant. But in the context of an article about the ethics of circumcision, it makes more sense. Indeed, perhaps it even helps the reader to understand why some of the issues differ between neonatal and later circumcision. Jakew (talk) 11:25, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

As there appears to be consensus about changing the title from 'Bioethics' to 'Ethics', perhaps we could agree to make that change. However, I also agree that there is a mismatch between the current title and the discussion of childhood circumcision, so I believe that changing the title to 'Ethics of circumcision" would be best. If there was consensus to do that, how do we do it? Changing the title of an article cannot be done with ordinary editing. Michael Glass (talk) 19:43, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Considering this article covers more than just neonatal circumcision and the fact that there are ethical issues to performing circumcision at all, regardless of age and consent, I move we change the name to "Ethics of circumcision" with various sections covering afore to mentioned. Garycompugeek (talk) 16:58, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Done, per apparent consensus above. Jakew (talk) 14:05, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Undue weight?
At the moment the article gives a summary of the various (and varying) positions of national medical organisations on circumcision. One, however, is put in an inset box, which immediately makes it stand out compared with the others. I believe that this gives undue weight to one point of view, and though the layout is attractive, I think it would be better if the article was more even-handed in its layout. What do others think? Michael Glass (talk) 06:22, 14 January 2009 (UTC)


 * I think it's important to look at the contents of the box. The AAP's position on circumcision specifically is discussed in the following paragraph. The box (which is from the circumcision policy statement, but doesn't actually mention the word 'circumcision') contains a general explanation of surrogate consent. This is likely to be informative to the reader, since several of the following paragraphs involve discussion of subtle issues relating to consent.
 * If we consider the contents of the box, then, is it undue weight? Actually, forget that: is it even controversial? Would anyone dispute that the concept of informed consent exists? Would anyone dispute that consent must sometimes be given by proxy? I doubt that there is much serious dispute about these points: anyone who has thought about the (hopefully rare) need to give infants and small children urgent medical care will probably agree.
 * We do, however, find that there is dispute over when and whether it is appropriate to invoke surrogate consent. For example, some argue that surrogate consent is appropriate only when there is an immediate therapeutic need. A person making that argument might well be opposed to surrogate consent in the case of non-therapeutic circumcision, but (s)he would not be arguing against the concept of surrogate consent, and would likely agree with the contents of the box. That person would probably concede that non-therapeutic circumcisions are performed through surrogate consent, at the same time as arguing that they should not be.
 * When understood in this way, I think the box serves as an informative "sidebar" that defines an important term and related concept. I don't think it's inappropriate to "box" it. That said, I wouldn't be wholly opposed to "unboxing" it. The major problem, I believe, lies in the paragraph before, which claims that the AAP are arguing that it is appropriate to perform neonatal circumcision by surrogate consent. While that may be the AAP's intent, the quotation doesn't directly support that assertion (see previous discussion above), and is somewhat misleading as a result. I shall try to think of a more NPOV way of putting it. I'd be grateful for any input you may have. Jakew (talk) 11:05, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Well said Jake. How about replacing the line before in the inset quote with, "Neonatal circumcision is performed with surrogate consent, described as follows by the American Academy of Pediatrics:"  ?  Blackworm (talk) 20:27, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Good suggestion. Implemented. Jakew (talk) 16:51, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Latest addition
I'm reverting a recent addition to the article, for two reasons:

First, the first three paragraphs of the addition are original research. These sources are about circumcision, not the ethics of circumcision, and their usage here is consequently inappropriate. To quote from policy: "To demonstrate that you are not adding original research, you must be able to cite reliable published sources that are directly related to the topic of the article, and that directly support the material as presented."

Second, the final paragraph cites "Uncircumcised-penis.com", which is not a reliable source. Jakew (talk) 16:16, 11 May 2010 (UTC)

especially as the child
The third paragraph of the article makes it clear that the "Ethics of Circumcision" is about infant circumcusion. The opening sentence, as reverted, is quite weak because it makes that assumption without stating it. Historys Docs (talk) 17:53, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes, that paragraph is about infant circumcision, but it was organised poorly. I've reordered the sentences to improve matters. Jakew (talk) 18:37, 5 August 2010 (UTC)


 * $\infty$ notes that the user seems to view sentences as furniture to be rearranged.

POV Detective (talk) 16:17, 11 August 2010 (UTC)

Lead sentence makes no sense
It isn't clear why removing tissue from the body is controversial. The lead sentence reads, Male circumcision involves the excision of genital tissue from the human body, so the ethics of circumcision are sometimes controversial. This is apparently introducing the topic by framing opposition to circumcision as being "opposition to any cutting into the body." We cannot misrepresent one side of the controversy in this way. That it's done so blatantly and in the lead sentence seems to be particularly disastrous. Blackworm (talk) 06:48, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, what would you propose instead? Jakew (talk) 08:15, 8 August 2010 (UTC)

The suspense is killing me. POV Detective (talk) 15:46, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Would this be an improvement in your opinion, Blackworm, as a version of the first sentence? "The ethics of male circumcision, which involves the excision of genital tissue from the human body, are sometimes controversial."  Since the word "genital" is there (in the current version as well), I don't see it as implying that any cutting into the body is controversial.  Cutting of genitals could be more controversial than cutting some other parts of the body.  Excision could be more controversial than cutting that doesn't remove tissue.  Cutting that heals with little or no scar could be less controversial.  Neonatal or child cutting tends to be more controversial.  I'm not sure whether "neonatal" can be easily fit into the first sentence since not all the controversies involve neonatal.  How about this version?  "The ethics of male circumcision, which involves the excision of genital tissue from the human body, are sometimes controversial, for example when it is performed on infants or children." ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 16:45, 8 August 2010 (UTC)

A subtitle to the article might clarify its focus. Here are two possibilities: POV Detective (talk) 17:35, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * 1. Ethics of Circumcision: Enlightenment vs. the Tenacity of Belief
 * 2. Ethics of Circumcision: Science vs. Tradition
 * First, Wikipedia articles don't have subtitles, and second, neither of your proposals are compatible with the neutral point of view policy. Jakew (talk) 17:45, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * No problem!
 * 1. Enlightenment vs. the Tenacity of Belief in the Ethics of Circumcision
 * 2. Science vs. Tradition in the Ethics of Circumcision
 * A neutral point of view does not require deference to superstition. POV Detective (talk) 18:05, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Assuming you're being sincere, please review WP:NPOV. Thank you.  Jakew (talk) 19:42, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't get it -- I thought Sincerity was a given on Wikipedia! POV Detective (talk) 20:11, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * One generally assumes so, yes. Jakew (talk) 20:20, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I accept your apology for questioning my Good faith Now let's get back to work! POV Detective (talk) 13:15, 9 August 2010 (UTC)
 * An inquiry into the Ethics of Circumcision assumes a knowledge of the conflict between Tradition and Modernism. POV Detective (talk) 13:20, 9 August 2010 (UTC)

What about this for a leading sentence:
 * Male circumcision involves the excision of genital tissue from the human body, and there is controversy about the ethics of this procedure. Michael Glass (talk) 13:52, 9 August 2010 (UTC)

I believe that the statement that male circumcision is "sometimes controversial" is puzzling. Should "sometimes controversial" be read as "controversial for some," "controversial in some instances," "sometimes controversial - and sometimes not." When analysed, the wording is open to a range of interpretations. That is why I think that we should consider a change in wording. Saying that there is controversy about the ethics of this procedure is a neutral and non-judgmental way of describing the controversy. Michael Glass (talk) 14:10, 9 August 2010 (UTC)


 * I don't think we should overstate the degree of controversy. I'd accept "some controversy": "Male circumcision involves the excision of genital tissue from the human body, and there is some controversy about the ethics of this procedure." Jakew (talk) 14:38, 9 August 2010 (UTC)
 * $\infty$ notes that Conflict avoidance of Controversy is itself a POV. POV Detective (talk) 15:44, 9 August 2010 (UTC)
 * $\infty$ suggests a new approach: "It cannot be said, of course, that proponents of circumcision deny its controversy so much as they ignore its affront to rationalism and human rights. Their dismissal of such considerations makes a thoughtful conversation on ethics more difficult." POV Detective (talk) 19:35, 9 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Such a statement is obviously incompatible with both WP:NPOV and WP:NOR, so I presume you're not proposing to include it. However, we can certainly quote or paraphrase arguments made in reliable sources, provided that they are properly attributed. Jakew (talk) 20:01, 9 August 2010 (UTC)

Jake, I think that your wording would be better than what is there at present, though I am unsure about adding the word some to what I proposed. I feel that tends to understate the degree of controversy. By way of evidence, there is to be a public forum in Sydney, Australia, run by a Jewish organisation, the title of which is "Infant Male Circumcision - A Dilemma for Parents"[]. Why this should be a matter of concern for Jewish parents I do not know, but there it is. The wording "there is controversy" doesn't imply a great controversy but "there is some controversy" suggests that the controversy may be marginal. Michael Glass (talk) 23:01, 9 August 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree, and it's about time the controversy surrounding this subject ceases to be understated in every related article. Or diluted -- presented as a series of small "controversies" involving things like an adult choosing male circumcision for himself, etc.  No, the major controversy is regarding infants and children, as clearly reflected by the sources.  I support Coppertwig's proposed text which reads (I changed Wikilinks), "The ethics of male circumcision, which involves the excision of genital tissue from the human body, are sometimes controversial, for example when it is performed on infants or children."  That makes it clear that it is controversial in that case, and not in such a matter as to overstate the controversy.  I do not support Michael Glass's proposed text, as it fails to focus on the specific example for which the vast majority of the controversy accounts.  Blackworm (talk) 07:27, 10 August 2010 (UTC)


 * $\infty$ notes that the proponents of circumcision apparently deny that its persistence as elective surgery is a medical or ethical controversy POV Detective (talk) 14:41, 10 August 2010 (UTC)

I have no problem with adding infant circumcision as an example of where there is controversy about circumcision. There are, however, other controversial areas, such as dangerous tribal practices as in South Africa and the forced circumcision of men, which happened in Indonesia and in East Africa. These other areas should not be overlooked. Michael Glass (talk) 02:54, 11 August 2010 (UTC)