Talk:Ethiopian historiography/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:01, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  17:01, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Hi, I just noticed this nomination. Based on my earlier involvement with Ethiopian articles, I'd like to offer some suggestions on content to help improve this article -- which otherwise IMHO is very close to GA status. -- llywrch (talk) 07:12, 31 July 2017 (UTC)
 * You're certainly free to make suggestions. I'll pay heed to anyone's advice if it will help to improve this article. Just bear in mind that it is who is the one reviewing the article, though. --  Pericles of Athens  Talk 15:44, 31 July 2017 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links : "Iranians" is a dab link.
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅


 * I fixed the "Iranians" link by pipe-linking it to Iranian peoples. Thanks for pointing it out! Pericles of Athens  Talk 06:15, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

 * "their lost overseas territories in Arabia as part of their realm." perhaps "their lost Arabian territories as part of their realm", unless you've done this intentionally to avoid confusion with modern day Saudi Arabia/Arab world, since the concept didn't exist back then.
 * I couldn't find anymore issues with prose; get any better at prose, and you'll put me out a job! -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  22:29, 31 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Hah! I'll try not to have you lose your job here! Lol. I fixed the sentence according to your suggestion. I'm glad you liked the article! -- Pericles of Athens  Talk 23:55, 31 July 2017 (UTC)