Talk:Euforia (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:24, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Will also take on this review. MWright96 (talk) 20:24, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Personal life

 * "Euforias son, born August 12, 1993," - Euforia's
 * "("The Grandson of El Soberano)" - this text is missing the closed quotation mark

Professional wrestling career

 * "Soberano made his Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL) debut on April 23, 2006, in one of the opening matches." - which match?
 * "He only wrestled a limited number of matches before disappearing from CMLL shows. His son currently works under the ring name Soberano Jr." - needs a reliable source to to verify this text of information
 * "those that portray the bad guys in wresting" - "bad guys" is informal; how about villains?
 * "that participated in the 2007 Gran Alternativa tournament, a tournament where an" - try to avoid close reptition of the word "tournament"
 * The date formats in "In June, 2007 Euforia was" and "In June, 2008 Los Nuevos Infernales" should not have a comma after the month per MOS:DATESNO
 * "in the second round they defeated Metallik and Metálico and in the third round they defeated Ángel Azteca Jr. and Máscara Purpura " - beat and eliminated, respectively to avoid the overuse of the word "defeat"
 * "at CMLL's La Hora Cero Pay-Per-View on" - the text in bold should be written as pay-per-view
 * "By mid-2009 Euforia and Nosferatu teamed less and less, Nosferatu was even replaced by" - a full stop should replace the comma, and the "word" "even" in the second bolded word is redundant

Los Cancerberos del Infierno (2009–2012)

 * What is a mid-carder?
 * "but actually two low card wrestlers that had been repackaged," - the comma should be a semi-colon
 * "while Cancerbero was known as Messala." - how about called for some variety?
 * "in a tournament to crown new Mexican National Trios Champion." - the new
 * "In early 2010 Euforia was entered in the first ever" - inaugural is more formal
 * "a tournament where CMLL normally teams up a Tecnico and a Rudo for a tournament where the teams represent the region they trained in." - probaly better: a tournament where CMLL groups a Technico and a Rudo together for a contest where teams represent the region they trained in.

Los Guerreros Laguneros (2012–present)

 * Delink Japanese as it is a major geographical region
 * "The team defeated Ángel de Oro and Ephesto in the first round of the tournament," - try tournament's first round,
 * "He was eliminated from the torneo cibernetico on September 1 by Kenny King." - by Kenny King on September 1.
 * "Euforia as a participant in the 2017 International Gran Prix." - was
 * "as they defeated the Sky Team in the main event of CMLL's Domingos Arena México show." -, as they defeated them