Talk:Eugene W. Hickok

Organization and dates
I did some copyediting on this but it read like a CV when I started so it was in reverse chronological order (which I tried to change to chronological order ) and it's missing a bunch of dates. RJFJR (talk) 16:55, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

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Substituted at 14:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

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Page Updates
I recently provided several updates and edits to this page.

First, I updated the career section, categorizing into pre-, during, and post-public service section as this subject had public service experience in state and local posts. I added correct dates where sourced and updated and added more accurate sources which showed those dates. This page also overweighted and elaborated unnecessarily on several items in the career section that could be best summarized in far fewer words and contained better within the subject's career history.

Second, I removed recent potential vandalism. Those edits look to perhaps be the result of current events that don't specifically and individually concern this subject and may be more properly elaborated on on other related pages.

Third, there was various advocacy and non-neutral language throughout the page which was removed and/or updated to be more as neutral as possible and/or more aligned with the sources that are cited. — Preceding unsigned comment added by RandomUsernameGoesHere (talk • contribs) 19:27, 6 May 2022 (UTC)