Talk:Eugenics in Mexico

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Hi!

My article is about the eugenics movement in Mexico. Eugenics in Mexico was at its peak in the late 20s, 30s but has some roots in earlier decades and some effects afterwards. I have divided my article into an introduction, a space for background and global context, and then the specific areas that the eugenics movement addressed. I would love some feedback in the following areas:

1) Is my article too biased in any way? Are there some phrases that I should change to be more neutral? 2) Do you think that the division of topics is relevant and/or helpful? Are there any sections that I should add or clarify? 3) Is my introduction sufficient or should I add some more context to the article?

Thanks! Rgoldfarbterry (talk) 17:44, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

Hi Rebecca! I really like your article so far. Overall, it's really clear and has a lot of information, and I don't think it's biased. In terms of the introduction, I think it is clear, but I don't think you need to make a section called "introduction." You can just have that paragraph at the top of the page. Also, I don't think you need the heading "Global Context." The text makes sense just under the larger heading of "background." Also, in that section, do you mean it wasn't only restricted to countries in the US and Europe? Because Latin America is in the western hemisphere so the wording is a little confusing. I really like your sex education section, but you use a lot of quotes. I think you might want to cut down on your number of quotes to keep in tune with other Wikipedia articles. Mlfisher (talk) 15:41, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

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