Talk:Eureka Iron & Steel Works/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 20:29, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous

Comments
1.
 * Expand the lead a bit
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:56, 6 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "The new company had 20,000 shares valued at twenty-five dollars each" - Link shares to Stock
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "2-mile (3.2 km) of river frontage" - I think there's a way to produce a plural using the template, you'll have to look at the documentation for that. Having miles instead of mile will improve the grammar.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:22, 6 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "A blast furnace and a bar mill known as the Wyandotte Rolling Mill" - Link blast furnace, we don't seem to have an article for bar mill
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "that it consumed 50,000 cords of wood a year" - Link cords to Cord (unit)
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Probably best to link charcoal too, although I won't insist on this if you think it's an overlink.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

2.
 * Drop the quote from ref 1, it's not related to the statement ref 1 is citing.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:25, 6 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Check worldcat for OCLCs, Woodford 2001 is new enough it might have an ISBN, especially since it's published by a university.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:08, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

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 * Consider adding an infobox. It's not necessary, but it would help with the article.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:56, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

Placing on hold. This one's in really good shape, I'm gonna go ahead and assess it as B class for now.
 * - All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:57, 6 June 2020 (UTC)