Talk:Evald Schorm

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Hi Vejvančický! I noticed you've worked this up from small beginnings. I've made a few minor edits for English style, without changing the substance. D'you want to take it much further? If so, please leave a message on my talk page. Best Regards. Haploidavey (talk) 19:55, 9 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Query: "Together they created many documents with strong humanistic and emotional content.[3]" Were these documentaries or short films? Haploidavey (talk) 20:15, 9 April 2009 (UTC) Typo fixed. Haploidavey (talk) 20:16, 9 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Špáta collaborated with Schorm on documentaries in the beginnings of his career. He was, however, Schorm's close collaborator during whole career, sometimes almost co-director, or co-author. Art documentary "Žít svůj život" about Czech photographer Josef Sudek is excellent example of their cooperation. --Vejvančický (talk) 20:50, 9 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Very bad quality, but at least something! Žít svůj život --Vejvančický (talk) 20:56, 9 April 2009 (UTC)


 * That's a stunning little film. Beautifully shot, paced and cut. Nothing extraneous. Thanks so much for that. Haploidavey (talk) 21:41, 9 April 2009 (UTC)


 * OK! I'm bushed. That's me for the night. Bon soir... Haploidavey (talk) 21:53, 9 April 2009 (UTC) This is a really nice little article, V. Haploidavey (talk) 21:57, 9 April 2009 (UTC)